[Report This]Date: 05/05/2008 01:27 PM Title: One: Uneventful
Love the concept--very original. And leave it to Hermione, even at 11, to not be afraid to venture into the wizarding world by herself (or to feel that she was too grown up for birthday parties & presents). Can't wait to read more!
Date: 04/25/2008 07:03 AM Title: Ten: The Philosopher's Stone
I just really like your story. It's fun to see Hermione's view of the boys. You're doing nice work capturing her personality.
Date: 04/25/2008 04:57 AM Title: Ten: The Philosopher's Stone
great update!
loved how Hermione came to the realization that Ron and Harry are little boys LOL
Date: 04/21/2008 10:34 AM Title: Nine: Gryffindor vs. Slytherin
love the update
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2008 10:55 AM Title: Eight: Enemies
(“Alakazampax: For the Young Witch on the Fly.”) to funny. It's hard to write good comedy. Well done. I really like your work, and I check for new chapters often. Keep it up.
Date: 04/03/2008 03:04 AM Title: Eight: Enemies
I love reading your story and can't wait for the next update! I especially like "Enemies." Poor Hermione, getting her period and meeting the troll all on the same day. Girls haven't changed much, be they witches or Muggles.
Date: 04/02/2008 09:49 AM Title: Eight: Enemies
very nice chapter
Date: 04/02/2008 06:40 AM Title: Eight: Enemies
"I think he's a bad seed"---I laughed out loud at this. I LOVE this story...please keep it up and thank you for writing it.
Date: 03/28/2008 05:33 PM Title: Seven: First Year Subjects
I can not wait to read the end
Date: 03/22/2008 04:47 PM Title: Seven: First Year Subjects
great update :)
just saw the first movie again yesterday which makes reading this even better
Date: 02/17/2008 02:14 AM Title: Four: Acceptance
Hermione as a Harry groupie LOL (oh well, still better than when I think back to my days of Backstreet Boys obsession LOL)
cute chapter, can't wait for more
Author's Response: Hey, better than being a Lockhart groupie. :-J Glad you enjoyed this, thank you for commenting.
Date: 02/16/2008 11:04 PM Title: Four: Acceptance
I am really enjoying this. I hope you keep it up ! I think you write Hermione's voice perfectly...so matter of fact and practical, even at such a young age. Can't wait til she sees Harry and Ron.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter Five ("Hogwarts Express") is being betaed right now, so I'll post it when it's ready.
Date: 12/30/2007 04:15 PM Title: Two: School
LOL! Good update, it's really fun to see Hermione before she went to Hogwarts. I must know what she did & Smeltings & why!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying this. She'll be at Hogwarts soon though.
Date: 12/30/2007 11:28 AM Title: Two: School
great chapter
Quote:
Maroon and orange, my too least favourite colours, together.
interesting!
Author's Response: Heh, that's meant to be ironic, in light of her later feelings for Ron (though those are the canonical Smeltings colours). Thank you for commenting.
Date: 12/29/2007 06:28 PM Title: Two: School
I'm loving this story!! I can totally picture Hermione at this age!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying my take on pre-canon Hermione, and thank you for commenting.