Date: 05/10/2008 04:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is a great story and it was a joy to read. I like the focus on these two characters, Seamus in particular. It is believable, intriguing and interesting to see how Seamus and Neville would deal with this post-war world. I like the fact that it's a gradual reconciliation, it's a step by step process and it's almost like we, as readers, are walking with Seamus until he finally gets to Neville at Hogwarts.
The angst, drama and heartbreaking emotion are all wonderfully written and your characterisation of Seamus is great.