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Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2007 04:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Haha! This was a great story - I could just imagine what Snape must have done to Dumbledore when he found him next. Or wanted to do, at least. Great story. Snape should deal with small children more often. :D

Author's Response:

i agree.  five year olds are the bain of many people's existence.  magical and muggle alike.


thanks for the review.  it means alot.

Reviewer: Dream_wia_Dream Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2007 05:08 PM Title: Chapter 1


Hex Dumbledore into a bunny!

OMG, laughing so hard I'm crying!!!  Hee hee hee 

Author's Response:


thanks for the vote of confidence!  maybe next time snape'll turn him into a butterfly.

Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2007 03:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE THIS STORY!! This was the best bet we ever lost! How do I love it? Let me count the ways:


There was a slam and a click behind him.  Uh oh. 

The traitorous voice from the other side of the door announced, “They’ve got wands Severus!  Do be careful!”

Manipulative Bastard indeed!!

2. “And you have bogeys hanging from your filthy snout.”    

This did not go over well.

3.“Would that be brown bunnies or white?” 

4.“There were more than two butterflies mister.  Everyone knows butterflies party in packs.” 

5. THE WHOLE REST OF THE STOR!! That you could make this so funny and so very Snape is awe-inspiring!! I'm an so glad that you have become a WRITER...yep, I said it, you are a WRITER!!

Author's Response: girl... this story would not even be in existence if not for YOUR inspiration.  lord.  plus, comedy is easy to write.  no way in hades i could accomplish what you pen on a daily basis.  *adores tj*

Reviewer: madam_minnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2007 02:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was laughing so hard through this whole fic that I had to read it twice! I loved it!

Names?  They wanted names for the damned butterflies?  They were bloody well lucky he didn’t tell the alternate version of the Mr. Diddles story where a backhoe came in, bulldozed the wood and put up a “Crispy Woodland Creature with Chips Shop.”    

ROFLMAO!!! This is too perfect for words! Thanks, so much, for submitting it to the site. Would you like this to appear under the Snape Challenge? 

Author's Response: oooh, thanks for the nice comment.  *makes note to send minnie a Crispy Woodland Creature Treat*. and i did submit it to the snape challenge just this afternoon.... rndo i win a prize?rnlol.

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