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Reviewer: YoucantspellHermionewithoutRon Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2010 05:25 PM Title: Restlessness

Quite simply, wow. I think you conveyed Ron's emotions well. You captured his genuine fear perfectly! Very well done! I particularly liked the stroking the locket bit. It kind of made it seem as if the only thing he can trust is the horcrux. I'm not fully sure if you meant it to be like that, but it was awesome anyway! :-)

Reviewer: misshogwarts1125 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 02:08 PM Title: Restlessness

that was really cool. I never thought too much about how the locket affected Ron after it was gone. really good detail on the story. Are you the same person who writes Now or Never on Checkmated? if you are I absolutely LOVE that story and suggest you put it up here.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Poor Ron and that locket - I totally see him having nightmares like this.  And I'm thrilled you like NoN!!! *grins*

Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 02:03 PM Title: Restlessness

Poor Ron! This is exactly what have been in the book if it weren't for those damned kids reading!! Thanks for giving this!

Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you so much!!  Knowing how passionate Ron is, I just can't believe that he didn't dream about things like this nonstop while wearing that locket.

Reviewer: shyshutterbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2007 09:18 AM Title: Restlessness

I love this to pieces.  I love you to pieces.  You knew both of those already, but I don't care.  :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  And you know I adore you, right?!  *smooches*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2007 07:41 AM Title: Restlessness

Wow! It's incredibly good how you manage about so many emotions in a few lines.

Poor Ron! I absolutely can see him getting nightmares like this in that DH timeplot. Well done, S!

And the smut hints...wonderful, as always you write so well about it!

Loved this drabble! Thank you! :D



Author's Response: Thank you so much hon!!  One of the parts of DH I love/hate is Ron's reaction to the Horcrux, and I really could see him dreaming this stuff. *pets him*

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