Date: 12/01/2007 08:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say, that, while I don't have a problem with the "fluffy, no one cares that we're gay"fics (I actually enjoy them), this piece is fantastic.
(this is why I don't beta. That sentence is awful!)
I think you did a great job of looking at the issue through the eyes of a 17 year old boy. That's not easy to do if you've never been there.
Date: 11/23/2007 08:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this line a lot: 'Them over you, always went left unsaid.' I like that look at Lily and James's relationship, that they have established something without really having established anything. That they mean something to one another without really meaning anything, if that makes sense. I also liked that last paragraph, with James calling Lily by her first name. I enjoyed reading this fic, thank you.