Date: 01/30/2010 03:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
hahaha LOL this was so crazy it was believable. You captured Snape well, particularly liked the little details, the nervous tic and allergy to Roses (!?!). It is so like Snape to think of regret!
One of my fave lines has got to be: “The no red clothing ward, especially caught me and my knickers off guard.” I was caught off guard. (sorry, had to slip that in)
Cho having a Hello Kitty doll was so perfectly ironic lurve it! when I read about Cho placing all the dolls in the room so they could watch as they- *shiver* disturbing...