Date: 09/24/2007 09:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderfully teasing little tale! Oh, Hermione likes to be dominated, eh? No wonder she couldn't fill it in! Erotic and sexy. Very well done.
Author's Response: Yes, she does love her Ron! lol Thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 09/23/2007 08:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh gosh this is great! Just the perfect combination of fluff and hotness! You've written Ron and Hermione perfectly: how they are comfortable with each other, being best friends, but still hot for each other, being man and woman!
Author's Response: I did try hard finding a balance between the fluff and teh hot! And thanks for the compliment about the characterisations, even when I do silly one shots like this, I try hard to get them right. Ta muchly for reviewing :D