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Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very poignant piece of work. I'm glad I got to read it.

Reviewer: drcjsnider Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 05:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad.  It is hard to picture Ron separated from Hermione and Harry.  You do a really great job with this though.

Reviewer: Wench Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2007 09:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was heartbreaking...

Author's Response:

Im glad your heart broke because of it, i enjoy the pain of others :D

Thank you for your review 

Reviewer: irma66 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2007 09:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really great concept.  Gave me leaky eyes just like Ron.

 You've got a couple of perspective issues where you seem to jump from 3rd person to 1st person.  I don't mean your italicized sections; those are a nice touch with his thoughts.  Specifically, paragraph 4 & 12 have this problem.  Otherwise I loved this !

Author's Response:

Yeah... i haven't written in a very long time, and once i got going, i didn't really stop, even though i got sidetracked with the perspective... Its a reacuring issue that i will probably lose.

In any case thank you for your review 

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