Date: 09/15/2007 03:56 PM Title: Remus' New Toy
I love this piece of writing. Your use of detail is fantastic. I love the entire train scene - both of them, really - they are so evocative of where young Remus is, emotionally. A great insight into his life, how it might have been, and the heartbreak of the red engine is just wonderful.
I would love to read more of this storyline. I know it says "complete," but we can dream, can't we?
I do plan to write more inside this continuity, but not in the sense of a direct follow-up; I'm currently working on a novel-length MWPP fic, starting in first year.
It's not going so well right now, though. Could be a while in the appearing.