Date: 06/13/2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 – Getting Ready
This is such a nice picture of family life without too much time having passed. It feels like we haven't missed much since the final battle (and I'm going more from the birth of children here rather than everyone getting married)
Also after the 7th book I always thought the Dursleys got a bum wrap so its nice to see them treated slightly better.
Date: 12/31/2007 06:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 – Getting Ready
I really love your fic, and the different take on the post DH years. I think your character development is great. I love the plot, and I love the interaction between the characters. Keep up the good work. Thanks for a great fic.
Date: 10/03/2007 02:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 – Brothers
An interesting start to this story, but there is a bit too much introspection and looking back. You might want to think of presenting events in a strictly chronological order and moving us to the introduction to young Miss Dursley as soon as possible.
I did like your characterisations of Dudley (a bit pompous - how could a son of Vernon be anything else?) and Ron (still not thinking before talking).