Date: 05/18/2008 07:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh! I love this! I hadn't thought of this moment like this, but the timing's right and OMG what a great line!
“Devil wouldn’t take you,” Sirius says, then smiles the handsome grin missing during the last few years. “Me either, apparently.”
Ha! Love it!!!
Yeah man, the afterlife is THE place to be!!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/27/2007 08:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is Peter the one who will not be joining them? Clearly, that's a Marauder who won't be going anywhere nice for his afterlife. Is it Lupin who does not accept death yet? Lupin was with them once Harry brought them with him into the forest so if he is who you are referring to, he better get with that acceptance thing!
Other than some confusion with that line, this is my favorite of your series. Snape and Sirius should be sparring with each other; even if they're on the same side, it would be unnatural to be buddy-buddy. Funny and touching. Good job!