


[Report This]Date: 07/10/2010 02:35 PM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Very good.
Date: 01/10/2009 05:18 PM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Excellent; thanks
Date: 11/06/2008 01:56 PM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
If there was an O.W.L in 'Harry Potter' Creative Writing, this would grade an 'O', any time.



[Report This]Date: 10/21/2007 08:24 AM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
So sweet...nice to see someone taking care of Harry for a change.



[Report This]Date: 08/27/2007 01:51 PM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Great beginning! I can't wait for more.



[Report This]Date: 08/26/2007 09:00 AM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Aw, that was brilliant! Such a wonderful trip into the minds of the Trio. You get the characterisations just right and, most importantly, you remain true to them in how you show their responses to the developing situation.
There were several lovely moments here to remember, the Hermione/Ron collision being the funniest. I also liked the various 'voices' of his inner monolouge. It was funny that he should have a mischief voice that sounded like Fred... unless Fred really was there, looking out for his favorite investor and silent partner.
I'm not usually a canon pairing fan, preferring H/Hr. However, this is an impressive work so far so I will be looking out for more of this story.
Date: 08/23/2007 10:41 PM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Awwwww! That's so sweet! I can almost see it happening this way!




[Report This]Date: 08/23/2007 06:25 PM Title: Quiet Comes the Dawn
Man. I cannot wait for more. Please write more. Please. Please. It's incredible.
JohnGalt