Date: 11/05/2009 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent turn of phrase: "...thrashing armful of wet angry hero..."
Great Metaphor and delicious visual:
"They snarled and glared and did another shot, and while Viktor was pouring Ron Bad Decision #26 they started to creep towards one another. Slowlike."
I was trying really hard not to avalanche you with comments, but I just loved those bits so much my restraint failed. Massive Restrainment Fail.
Date: 09/16/2009 01:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This has got to be one of the most entertaining and wonderful stories I've read! I LOVE how you told the whole Harry/Draco thing without ever focusing on them. And Viktor... HOT! The whole thing. Just, well... I think I need to go turn the fan on. Whew!