Date: 08/24/2007 05:28 PM Title: Chapter 4. We Are Swamped By Rage
I love Luna - she always says the darndest, most honest things. Wonderful chapter. I love the way you are developing the characters, and pulling in some lesser characters, like Angelina. Good work, looking forward to more!
i'm so relieved that luna is ok. i wasn't 'sure' of her at all. thanks for the feedback.
Date: 08/21/2007 06:48 PM Title: Chapter 4. We Are Swamped By Rage
Oh, loved this chapter!! All the tension was palpable, and then Harry apologized (yah!), and things are working themselves out (I hope)! And I giggled at Lee being in love with Luna's husband ...
i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for letting me know.
(we all have to nod at glee now! it's practically canon!)
Date: 07/20/2007 05:06 AM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
Oh, Harry. And Ron. And Hermione. *Smushes them*
I'm trying to get my head into a canon sort of place, but I just couldn't stay away from this. What a great sequel to a great story. I love that you're delving into the hard stuff and hashing it out.
*scoops up Miranda and brings her over to play with Hogan*
so glad you read! and yeah - i'm sure that miranda and hogan would get on beautifully....
Date: 07/20/2007 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
We also don't want to contribute to nipple confusion
I love you!
get vomited on by her after a feed
My husband was by far the best at getting vomited on!
"And don't be daft, Harry. Show him."
*very much Fred!love*
if harry wasn't so out of sorts he would have said that he never had any problem with nipple confusion... he always knew whose nipple he had in his mouth.
*loves you too*
Date: 07/19/2007 05:18 PM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
"But what about the children!" Gah, that's such a load of .... There are so many people out there with alternative families - blended families, gay couples with children, triads, polyamorous families, etc., who do an excellent job of raising stable and loved children. I get so TIRED of hearing that. Anyway, great job of capturing that in Marietta's insane attacks.
Nice chapter. I can imagine that the normal miscommunication problems that couples have are compounded when there are three involved. I hope Harry gets his head out of his ass and shows Ron the article so they can get past his insecurities.
I hope DH doesn't keep you from posting the next one soon!
yes i used that phrase for that specific reason. people say it and don't even know what they are talking about.
at the same time i think that a relationship of three would be inherently more complicated to make work, than a relationship of two, and i wanted to really explore how it truly would operate.
the next chapter is partly written, but i don't think will get finished/beta'd and uploaded before DH unfortunately, but i am committed enough to this story to continue it After i think.
thanks for letting me know your thoughts,
Date: 07/19/2007 04:54 PM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
I just adore the quiet moment in bed with when Hermione responds kindly to Harry and how he just beams. He's like a child seeking that approval. *sigh*
Your Fred is fabulous. I've never liked a Fred so much. And Lee -and he's only implied! Hee.
(how pitifully domestic am I, that I say 'nooo' when the clean laundry falls on the floor?)
Harry and Ron's fight is simply devine, in that *bites lipe* oh no! - and 'damn they're so sexy' sort of way.
I lol the way Ron starts arguing against pacifiers with hermione's words and then switches to his own once he's frustrated.
I can not wait to see what happens when Ron goes back to Harry.
lee has become the new terry boot!
(and i changed the laundry to falling on the sofa because i couldn't handle it either - even though it only needs a scourgify or something!!!)
we might have to wait til After to continue this one though the chapter's partly written.
thanks for all your support, maple. *snog*
Date: 07/17/2007 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Two - Singing Light Songs to the Heavy Hearted
Hmm, this is a little bit uncomfortable to read (which means you are doing an excellent job portraying this problem). But loving the continuation of their story...happily-ever-after is only in fairy tales, after all!
i hope the story works out in a way you find believable and satisfying.
thanks so much for your comment.
Date: 07/16/2007 10:18 PM Title: Chapter Two - Singing Light Songs to the Heavy Hearted
This is such a great story so far. What Hermione is going through sounds a lot like baby blues. I hope that's not the case. Being that they're in a different sort of relationship; Ron and Harry might need to include feeling her up a bit and calling her every now and then for help with something. They are doing a lot, (well, Harry is) and that's part of why she's feeling unneeded! This story is sooooooo good so far. Please update soon! Now that I've psychoanalyzed a fan fic story, I'll go now...
See how good I think this is!! :)
oh some amatuer psychoanalysing is always welcome!
yeah - the poor boys think they're helping but actually are making things worse.
hopefully they'll all make it through this in one lovely smooshy, trio!loving pile.
Date: 07/16/2007 05:42 PM Title: Chapter Two - Singing Light Songs to the Heavy Hearted
Aww, poor Hermione. Poor Harry and Ron. Sound like postpartum. Or at least I hope it's that and not an evil spell or something sinister.
I hope Molly realizes that Harry and Ron ARE doing a lot for her. Or at least Harry is. Hopefully they can bring her 'round.
thanks for reading and commenting.
ron and harry are both trying very hard to work out what to do with hermione.
everyone loves her very much.
Date: 07/11/2007 07:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Regard its Fruit as Forbidden
Uh oh! My Spidey senses are tingling. Hopefully I can read the next chapter soon and she will be told that they do need her.
Ok, and I had to ask, Charlotte and Miranda? Fan of SatC or just like the names?
spidey senses? lol. ok.
i am afraid i don't know what SatC is...
they both just struck me as very 'hermione' kinds of names. i liked the 'big charlie/little charlie' thing and miranda is a wizards daughter in the tempest, so....
thanks for letting me know you're reading.
Date: 07/11/2007 11:55 AM Title: Prologue
I can tell you worked very hard on this! I see talent in both the writing and the graphics! I hope readers and graphics critics both realize and appraise this story's worth! You, and if there was an artist who helped, did a great job!
thanks for your kind words.
i did indeed have help from the very talented Quidditch Hair (she is thesteppyone on lj) and we used (with permission of course!) a piece of fan art by really corking.
i'm glad you enjoyed it. i hope you also enjoy the rest of the story.