Date: 08/24/2007 05:28 PM Title: Chapter 4. We Are Swamped By Rage
I love Luna - she always says the darndest, most honest things. Wonderful chapter. I love the way you are developing the characters, and pulling in some lesser characters, like Angelina. Good work, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
i'm so relieved that luna is ok. i wasn't 'sure' of her at all. thanks for the feedback.
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Date: 08/21/2007 06:48 PM Title: Chapter 4. We Are Swamped By Rage
Oh, loved this chapter!! All the tension was palpable, and then Harry apologized (yah!), and things are working themselves out (I hope)! And I giggled at Lee being in love with Luna's husband ...
Author's Response:
i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for letting me know.
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(we all have to nod at glee now! it's practically canon!)
Date: 08/20/2007 09:33 AM Title: Chapter 4. We Are Swamped By Rage
I'm really enjoying this. I love the trio together. Luna is always Luna. Keep writing
Author's Response:
glad you're enjoying it! thanks for letting me know.
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[Report This]Date: 07/20/2007 05:06 AM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
Oh, Harry. And Ron. And Hermione. *Smushes them*
I'm trying to get my head into a canon sort of place, but I just couldn't stay away from this. What a great sequel to a great story. I love that you're delving into the hard stuff and hashing it out.
*scoops up Miranda and brings her over to play with Hogan*
Author's Response:
*bounce*
so glad you read! and yeah - i'm sure that miranda and hogan would get on beautifully....
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[Report This]Date: 07/20/2007 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
We also don't want to contribute to nipple confusion
I love you!
get vomited on by her after a feed
My husband was by far the best at getting vomited on!
"And don't be daft, Harry. Show him."
*very much Fred!love*
Author's Response:
if harry wasn't so out of sorts he would have said that he never had any problem with nipple confusion... he always knew whose nipple he had in his mouth.
*loves you too*
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[Report This]Date: 07/19/2007 08:04 PM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
Your stories are awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much!
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[Report This]Date: 07/19/2007 05:18 PM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
"But what about the children!" Gah, that's such a load of .... There are so many people out there with alternative families - blended families, gay couples with children, triads, polyamorous families, etc., who do an excellent job of raising stable and loved children. I get so TIRED of hearing that. Anyway, great job of capturing that in Marietta's insane attacks.
Nice chapter. I can imagine that the normal miscommunication problems that couples have are compounded when there are three involved. I hope Harry gets his head out of his ass and shows Ron the article so they can get past his insecurities.
I hope DH doesn't keep you from posting the next one soon!
Author's Response:
yes i used that phrase for that specific reason. people say it and don't even know what they are talking about.
at the same time i think that a relationship of three would be inherently more complicated to make work, than a relationship of two, and i wanted to really explore how it truly would operate.
the next chapter is partly written, but i don't think will get finished/beta'd and uploaded before DH unfortunately, but i am committed enough to this story to continue it After i think.
thanks for letting me know your thoughts,
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[Report This]Date: 07/19/2007 04:54 PM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
I just adore the quiet moment in bed with when Hermione responds kindly to Harry and how he just beams. He's like a child seeking that approval. *sigh*
Your Fred is fabulous. I've never liked a Fred so much. And Lee -and he's only implied! Hee.
(how pitifully domestic am I, that I say 'nooo' when the clean laundry falls on the floor?)
Harry and Ron's fight is simply devine, in that *bites lipe* oh no! - and 'damn they're so sexy' sort of way.
I lol the way Ron starts arguing against pacifiers with hermione's words and then switches to his own once he's frustrated.
I can not wait to see what happens when Ron goes back to Harry.
Author's Response:
lee has become the new terry boot!
(and i changed the laundry to falling on the sofa because i couldn't handle it either - even though it only needs a scourgify or something!!!)
we might have to wait til After to continue this one though the chapter's partly written.
thanks for all your support, maple. *snog*
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[Report This]Date: 07/19/2007 03:49 PM Title: Chapter Three - The Crumbs of Your Gossip
*gives you a drunken woo*
Author's Response: *raises glass*
Date: 07/17/2007 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Two - Singing Light Songs to the Heavy Hearted
Hmm, this is a little bit uncomfortable to read (which means you are doing an excellent job portraying this problem). But loving the continuation of their story...happily-ever-after is only in fairy tales, after all!
Author's Response:
i hope the story works out in a way you find believable and satisfying.
thanks so much for your comment.
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[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 10:18 PM Title: Chapter Two - Singing Light Songs to the Heavy Hearted
This is such a great story so far. What Hermione is going through sounds a lot like baby blues. I hope that's not the case. Being that they're in a different sort of relationship; Ron and Harry might need to include feeling her up a bit and calling her every now and then for help with something. They are doing a lot, (well, Harry is) and that's part of why she's feeling unneeded! This story is sooooooo good so far. Please update soon! Now that I've psychoanalyzed a fan fic story, I'll go now...
See how good I think this is!! :)
Elle
Author's Response:
oh some amatuer psychoanalysing is always welcome!
yeah - the poor boys think they're helping but actually are making things worse.
hopefully they'll all make it through this in one lovely smooshy, trio!loving pile.
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Date: 07/16/2007 05:42 PM Title: Chapter Two - Singing Light Songs to the Heavy Hearted
Aww, poor Hermione. Poor Harry and Ron. Sound like postpartum. Or at least I hope it's that and not an evil spell or something sinister.
I hope Molly realizes that Harry and Ron ARE doing a lot for her. Or at least Harry is. Hopefully they can bring her 'round.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and commenting.
ron and harry are both trying very hard to work out what to do with hermione.
everyone loves her very much.
thanks again.
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[Report This]Date: 07/11/2007 07:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Regard its Fruit as Forbidden
Uh oh! My Spidey senses are tingling. Hopefully I can read the next chapter soon and she will be told that they do need her.
Ok, and I had to ask, Charlotte and Miranda? Fan of SatC or just like the names?
Author's Response:
spidey senses? lol. ok.
i am afraid i don't know what SatC is...
they both just struck me as very 'hermione' kinds of names. i liked the 'big charlie/little charlie' thing and miranda is a wizards daughter in the tempest, so....
thanks for letting me know you're reading.
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[Report This]Date: 07/11/2007 11:55 AM Title: Prologue
I can tell you worked very hard on this! I see talent in both the writing and the graphics! I hope readers and graphics critics both realize and appraise this story's worth! You, and if there was an artist who helped, did a great job!
Author's Response:
thanks for your kind words.
i did indeed have help from the very talented Quidditch Hair (she is thesteppyone on lj) and we used (with permission of course!) a piece of fan art by really corking.
i'm glad you enjoyed it. i hope you also enjoy the rest of the story.
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[Report This]Date: 07/11/2007 09:21 AM Title: Prologue
It was so cool to read the articles!
Author's Response:
yay. glad you enjoyed them.
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