Date: 06/12/2007 10:44 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
we'll see how this turns out. good so far. although, i doubt Hr would give up her virginity to some guy who she didnt really love... and i hope you know that this chapter is posted twice. unless you ment to. but ya. take a look.
Author's Response: I didn't mean to post it twice, not sure what happened there. Thanks for the review! Just keep in mind that Hermione didn't exactly give it up to a random guy - they had been dating for quite some time
Author's Response: **Sorry, interpreted what you were saying wrong the first time I read over it. I see what you meant now, and I can understand that opinion. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/12/2007 05:26 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
ummmmmmm, i don't think you finished your story. you stopped at the "what she found was not quite what she expected" part and the repeated the entire story
Author's Response: Actually, this chapter is finished; it was supposed to end at that part as a sort of cliffhanger. Not sure what went wrong with the repetition, though.