[Report This]Date: 06/13/2007 05:27 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
Wonderful beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2007 10:44 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
we'll see how this turns out. good so far. although, i doubt Hr would give up her virginity to some guy who she didnt really love... and i hope you know that this chapter is posted twice. unless you ment to. but ya. take a look.
Author's Response: I didn't mean to post it twice, not sure what happened there. Thanks for the review! Just keep in mind that Hermione didn't exactly give it up to a random guy - they had been dating for quite some time
Author's Response: **Sorry, interpreted what you were saying wrong the first time I read over it. I see what you meant now, and I can understand that opinion. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2007 06:17 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
Why does the story repeat itself?
Date: 06/12/2007 05:26 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
ummmmmmm, i don't think you finished your story. you stopped at the "what she found was not quite what she expected" part and the repeated the entire story
Author's Response: Actually, this chapter is finished; it was supposed to end at that part as a sort of cliffhanger. Not sure what went wrong with the repetition, though.
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2007 03:50 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2007 03:31 PM Title: A Foolish Proposal
hi! I just wanted to say that teher's something wrong with the chapter!
it repeats the same part twice and the ending isn't there.
but so far, it seems good
Author's Response: thank you!