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Reviewer: dumdoc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 07:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's the quiet ones..... .

Reviewer: Tj1501 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 01:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic style.

Reviewer: alloy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed it the first time too.

Reviewer: tjwritter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 08:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That was great! Such a unique way to use the second person! The mystery of who the "you" was (yes, even in things this short I can't read ahead!) and who the girl was and then not caring (I was scared there for a minute that it was Madame Hooch....ewww!)

I knew Neville had it in him!! Great!

Reviewer: robin777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 06:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

That ws great. I liked that there were no names of the girls.

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