Date: 09/02/2007 08:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was great! Such a unique way to use the second person! The mystery of who the "you" was (yes, even in things this short I can't read ahead!) and who the girl was and then not caring (I was scared there for a minute that it was Madame Hooch....ewww!)
I knew Neville had it in him!! Great!