Reviewer: kerosinkanister Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 12:14 AM Title: Prologue

I usually don't find stories focusing on the children very interesting but you've definitely got me curious with this chapter.  I liked the chaos of the Weasley's house and how Anastasia got along (or didn't!) with Finley and Sebastian.

 

I do have one bit of criticism, though.  The chapter felt too much like a name dump and it made it hard to decide which characters are or will be important.  It's probably better with so many new names to hold off naming a character until they're important and actually in the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I love constructive critisim and your was very helpful. I'm glad you like the story. :D I'm endeavouring to get a new chapter up soon.