Date: 07/30/2008 08:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was an interesting piece. It was well written, and created a good scene. I am curious as to a little more background on the injury, why she's so isolated from her friends, etc.
I like the open-ended ending. Not every story needs to have a neat little wrap up.
Date: 06/10/2007 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was just absolutely BRILLIANT! I'm not usually a fan of crossovers but this was just such an amazing piece of fiction! I sincerely hope that you might be inspired to add to the story because it is so intriguing and well written.