Date: 09/04/2009 03:56 PM Title: The Third
I so hoped for a happy ending!
I really adore this piece of writing! You really got me believing in what Draco described the relationship was like. And then Harry's outburst and everything just became so clear to me!!
Wonderful how you managed to transfer that feeling!
Guess I'll start reading more of your stuff, if it's as good as this story!
Date: 05/13/2009 07:44 AM Title: The Third
Your conclusion was absolutely brilliant. And the opening was fantastic. And every word in between was perfect. I was so caught up in your rendering of Draco, so sympathetic yet realistic, that I could feel the clench of his despair. When Harry let go, it was like a light went on in my own head, a rushing was in my own ears, and it was breathtaking. Your writing is incredible, and thank you for gifting your readers with it!
Date: 06/07/2007 05:12 PM Title: The Third
This is beautiful. Well thought out, carefully considered, completely believeable. It's as we hope they will be. Draco is so engaging, even when he's being an utter prat. You are so faithful to him, so understanding of him. You make him stand alone, and yet I can see this Draco evolving from JKR's. That's the biggest compliment that I can give you; I can see these men growing from the boys we already know. Even though they are only seventeen, they've seen so much, lived so much, that they are not children. And Harry; well, who, male or female, wouldn't want their own private Harry? When I read what you write, I want to be a better writer, someone who can make people feel the way that this made me feel. I love it. It's terrific.
Author's Response: (sniffle...blush) No really...I'm all wet eyed. I aint even kiddin. I hunger to provoke emotion...connection...feelings. To make someone else feel the urge to express themselves more is abou the highest goal I could ever hope for. You honor me. I wanted to show a threesome as an accidental catalyst for change and self awareness, instead of a purely tawdry event, and I am very happy that it resonated :-) Sigh...thank you for the kewlest review I've had in quite awhile :-) Peace to you, Smaayel