Date: 03/04/2014 10:31 PM Title: Revelation
This is my first review on the Pitch and I had to leave one here because I absolutely adored your story. Amazing plot and beautifully written. I just loved the way Hermione realized her life only made sense with her memories of Ron. Great great story!
Date: 07/28/2010 09:14 AM Title: Revelation
Brilliant story! So glad Hermione finally took her memories back (I don't know how she had the strengh to push Dream!Ron out in the first place lol)
Thank you for taking the time to write my favourite characters and post your stories online. You don't know how much I love reading HP fan fiction and if it were for authors like you, I'd be really missing HP right now! x ~AmandaM ;)
Date: 11/23/2007 08:48 PM Title: Prologue
I like this glimpse into Hermione's thoughts while Harry deals with the aftermath of Sirius's death. It really shows the burden his friends carried for him. I particularly like that in Hermione's case, she feels like it is her responsibility to find the answer, since everyone else seems to think she will be the one to do so. Great story.
Date: 05/14/2007 03:52 AM Title: Revelation
oh what a gorgeous, haunting piece.
i thought at first it was going to be a wip, and wondered how i'd cope with the wait for the next part, but i've been able to have immediate gratification and read the conclusion now.
the way that hermione became less and less of herself as she emptied the dreams into the pensieve. the creeping sensation of ron. and it was a lovely ron! (which is how i rate a fic, to be honest!)
thankyou for ron's flippant remark being the key! *loves*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. (I'm a Ron fan too. I loved the idea of his insight being the key that unlocked the rest. I'm happy you liked it too.)