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Reviewer: kemsada Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 06:11 AM Title: Revelations

I love this story so much, especially the last metaphor, about the black and white world with Harry in color- that's the theme my film project is based around, as soon as the hero gets the girl, the film goes from black and white to color. So it's awesome, basically, is what I'm trying to say (:.

Author's Response: That film project sound interesting! Good luck with it. Thank you for the lovely comment.

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Date: 05/01/2007 10:51 PM Title: Revelations

That was wonderful. I can't wait to find out why Hermione was so upset.

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Date: 05/01/2007 10:29 PM Title: The Head Boy's Quarters

I love how they get to the head's rooms.

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Date: 05/01/2007 10:16 PM Title: The Hogwarts Express

Hermione was perfect. I could see her handling the meeting just like that. I loved Ron and Seamus in this.

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Date: 05/01/2007 09:51 PM Title: The Quidditch Captain and the Head Boy

I love what Harry did for Ron. The Ginny/Harry conversation was cute.

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Date: 05/01/2007 09:09 PM Title: Early Morning Confessions

That was wonderful. I think Hermione could always use a bit of girl talk.

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Date: 04/30/2007 07:41 PM Title: Lessons Learned from Wizard's Chess

I love Ron in this chapter and I love that Harry recognizes how great Ron would be as captain.

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Date: 04/30/2007 07:32 PM Title: The Wizard's Index

This was great. I love how supportive Harry was even though he probably thought her project was rather boring.

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Date: 04/30/2007 07:09 PM Title: Late Night at Grimmauld Place

That was lovely Harry/Ginny moment.

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Date: 04/30/2007 06:34 PM Title: A Joining of Forces

That was great. I loved the talk Hermione and Ginny had. I love how Hermione can be so insecure. 

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Date: 04/30/2007 05:47 PM Title: A Meeting of the Order

You've got to love the twins. They have the best ideas.

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Date: 04/29/2007 11:20 PM Title: Ginny's Gift

That was great. I loved how determined Ginny is here.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the reviews!

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Date: 04/29/2007 09:45 PM Title: An Empty Grimmauld Place

That was lovely. I love seeing Remus and Harry spending time together.

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Date: 04/29/2007 06:58 PM Title: The Letter That Didn't Come

That was lovely. I love how Ron acts after reading a letter from Hermione.

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Date: 04/29/2007 05:12 PM Title: A Private Talk with Petunia

That was really good. I think you really kept Petunia in character here.

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