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Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 08:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ Public Displays

Ok I am even more in love with this story than I was. It's just so sweet, the two of them and their insecurities. It's lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like chapter 8!

Reviewer: Betynha Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 05:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Date

Hello Karen! o/

First, I'm sorry I couldn't read chapter 5 when it was released. ç.ç Anyway, chapter five was perfect. I really loved the boys giving Ron all sorts of advices (and I laughed with Harry's... hehe). And I must say you're the only writer who makes me like Harry... oh, you know that! I loved to read the school becoming true! Gin is too noble and that's why I love her... and Harry now! *.*

About chapter six... everything was perfect! Ron was fantastic, as always! And Hermione hoping for his kiss... so beautiful! *.* oh, not to mention the kisses... hot and wonderful to read as well. This part was amazing: "No other man would ever touch her lips or any part of her as long as Ron was alive and probably not even after that". Fantastic!

This was a very well done chapter... thanks for making my day! ^^

Cheers... see ya! o/



Author's Response: Betyha, I'm so happy that I've made you like Harry. You know that is too crazy to me that you don't really like him, but if I can do anything to change that then I've done my job! Thank you so much for the lovely review, I hope you like chapter 7...let me know!

Reviewer: Tart Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 04:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Date

Oh that was just so lovely!

The Gardens were such a romatic idea and I loved the hot kisses at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thank  you for the review! I'm so happy you liked it. It shouldn't be long for chapter 7!

Reviewer: Anwe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 03:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Date

aww, they are so cute! :D

I loved the nervous sort of innocense in the beginning of the chapter and how that changed in to passion later on. You really managed to caputre what I think is R/Hr!

I can't wait untill the next chapter! :D



Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm happy you liked it and chapter 7 will be up sooner than I anticipated, so that's a good thing.

Reviewer: quizzical Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 03:02 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Date

awwwwwww... it should almost be TOO sappy, and yet it was so real. ron all eager to please.

the kisses at the end were scorching hot and i loved that - as frustrating as it was for us and hermione - he walked away and said goodnight.

would that we all had a ron weasley to adore us like that!

Q



Author's Response: YES! Shouldn't we all! I so want to be adored by my own sweet Ronnie...but alas, I can only hope and write! LOL! Thank you for the review. I hope you like the rest.

Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 06:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Advice and Other Battles

Ohh I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is a fantastic story. I haven't read the sequel yet but I'm definitely planning on reading it now. Beautifully done!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I somehow missed this review! Thank you for it, though. I hope you enjoy the sequel.

Reviewer: Anwe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 09:06 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Advice and Other Battles

I love this story so far!

keep up the good work! :D 



Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 6 will be up soon!

Reviewer: quizzical Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 03:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Advice and Other Battles

harry and ron friendship fic rules.

this had so many things i love to read.

the weasley boys were great, and the harry/ginny sex was so real and nuanced.

Q



Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the Date!

Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Advice and Other Battles

This chapter was cute.  I had been wondering how the school came to be.  As much as I love the Ron/Hermione story, I still love Harry/Ginny.  I was wondering if you will do more of their story in the future?

Author's Response:

Thank you! Well, I do have a Harry/Ginny version of four days planned next and I JUST thought of a plot bunny for a sequel to BONDED, though I still need to work out the kinks, but that's what's coming next.

Reviewer: Roach76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 08:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Advice and Other Battles

I have two fave parts. "Wank." was just drop out of your seat rolling on the floor with laughter. I don't know why but it brought me back to a 'Something About Mary' moment.

 

The other was Remus "Harry where are you?" Harry's response "Hell mate." OMG, again I thought this is Harry at his best. I loved it, the whole "How many kids were you planning to have?" moment had me laughing and thinking this is Harry spending too much time with Ron and the rest of the Weasley's. Oh and the girl with no knickers and Angelina beating Fred with the bottle. HA! You're brilliant and I need more quick; pretty please?!



Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, that WAS from Something About Mary with a Harry Potter twist! But it's good advice, right? LOL. I LOVE writing the Weasley men, there is so much you can do with them! Hope I can incorporate them in other parts...chapter 6 will be up really soon!

Reviewer: Annemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 08:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Advice and Other Battles

What a great chapter.  I love the tutorial the Weasley men gave Ron before the date, but Harry's advice was precious!  And once again, I like the way you are giving us background about things that come up in your other story - like why and how Ginny starts her school.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! The Weasley men are the best! I love writing them. I loved the idea of the school and that Harry did not want to live in that hovel at first but will do anything to please the love of his life. Hope you like chapter 6, it will be up soon.

Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2007 06:18 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Brilliant Ideas

Finally I could finish reading this chapter! o/

Hello Karen! Well, I really loved this chapter. It was so nice to read, light and fun. And Ron is simply brilliant making Hermione think! hehehe... I just hope they have a unforgettable date! I don't much to say... you know I enjoy reading your Ron and your Hermione and I am really loving this story!

Good luck to you!

See ya!

o/



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you are enjoying it. I hope you like what's coming up. Chapter 5 should be up soon!

Reviewer: quizzical Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 04:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Nightmares

oh i am enjoying this!

we have trio!friendship which is my second very favourite thing (after trio!love).

we have the weasley men. the weasley men including harry, and the weasley men turning on harry to protect their image of their sister.

then we have ron playing hermione so brilliantly to get her thinking! how fantastic is that scene?

certainly looking forward to updates.

Q



Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing Ron pushing Hermione's buttons, I think he does that on purpose a lot and she never knows.

Reviewer: yaara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 01:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Nightmares

I love your emotional and slightly insecure Hermione --she seems to be given "super powers" a little too often, so this is lovely. 

The connection between Harry and Hermione is brilliant as well! :)

 *waits patiently for more*



Author's Response: Thank you! I think Hermione is a fantastic character and I'm only sorry I didn't create her. I do read a lot of things that make her too brainy and she comes off cold. I don't see her like that at all. I think she is very passionate, very, emotional, as well as extemely intelligent. Thanks for the review, 5 coming soon!

Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 09:35 AM Title: Chapter 3-Betrothed

Wow, thanks God! This update made my day! It's serious, I thought it was a very light and romantic chapter since the begining. *.*

And I have to say that I think I'm in love with Harry now! o.o It's a miracle...hehe... anyway, it was lovely and touching all he said to Ginny and how he asked her... loved!

Oh, I was just wondering when this beautiful friendship between Harry and Hermione would appear and when I read I really loved Harry. The way you showed their friendship was wonderful as well. ^^

And Ron finally did something useful (I can't believe... I said this? O.O)! Well, at least he did. ^^ Now, I'm eager to know how they'll manage to not snog in front of everybody (hehehe... just a joke).

A very good chapter... it really made my day. Thanks!

See ya! o/



Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't respond to this sooner, somehow I missed it! Thank you so much for your review, I love them! I hope you like chapter 4, it's been submitted so it should be up anyday now. I've just finished chapter 5 and 6 so they are with my beta now...so the updates should be freguent.

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