Date: 08/26/2008 07:24 PM Title: Chapter 30 - These Dreams
Another brilliant chapter! I love the dialogue between Ginny and Harry! As always, you keep us all wanting more!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, knew I could count on you to stroke my ego! Glad you liked it. Smooches right back at you!
Date: 08/19/2008 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 29 - A Brilliant Mind
You have a very active imagination. The curse, the poem, the way the are all working together is really good. I am concerned about Draco, one does not walk away from Voldemort that easily. Bad things are bound to happen to my favourite character. Glad he made the right choice. Since Hermione has chosen Ron (I am shaking my head) couldn't you find him someone he could love? Just asking. Good job with Snape, saying a lot while at the same time saying very little. (I am talking about previous chapters) I shall wait patiently for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Dear Elena, Thank you for the lovely compliment. This story took a lot of time and effort and I hope it all comes together in the end. (Fingers crossed). I'm sort of holding my breath for the reviews at the end...hoping I'm not tarred and feathered. I had to respond because I love your comment about finding someone for Draco. You're reading my mind...that's a tease...just wait a bit longer! Also, thanks for the Snape comments. I loved writing him that way and you're exactly right...I wanted the reader to draw their own conclusions based on Snape's statements...just like I thought Draco would. I think that is what makes Snape a great "double agent" - his ability to tell you everything and really tell you nothing at the same time. He's never lying!
Date: 08/13/2008 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 16 - His One and Only
Draco is going down the same path as Snape. Reluctant Death Eater having second thoughts about the meaning of it all only to end working as a double agent on behalf of those he used to loath. My concern is that Draco may end up having the same fate as poor Snape. I guess I have to keep on reading. Lucius is a piece of work, let me tell you.
Date: 08/13/2008 09:02 AM Title: Chapter 15 - An Unlikely Friendship
I feel for Draco. It is like being part of mafia gang, one can easily get in but getting out is nearly impossible. I like what you did with Draco and Harry at the hospital. From the body language through Harry's inner thoughts. I am reading many stories at the same time, yours here and some at another sites that is why I am moving so slowly catching up.
Date: 08/10/2008 02:30 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Apart and Together
Well done! Who was the hooded man? Ron's injury worries me. I know I am taking a long time to catch up but life, 'real life" happens all the time plus I have stories to read in at least four more sites therefore I have to manage my time wisely. Once again, good chapter.
Date: 08/09/2008 09:42 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Acting
Draco has to pretend he likes Hermione, but, there is the tiniest pang of guilt and some else growing within him. Hermione, on the other hand is wondering about Draco's change of heart. Harry and Hermione have to pretend to be a couple (Why oh why J K you had to disappoint so manyt? Anyway...) which may have unexpected consecuences. Ron has surprised me but I am sure not for how long. He is like a ticking bomb, adult behaviour eludes him when it is most needed. Sorry I know you like the guy. I still enjoy your story though.
Author's Response: I assume you like H/Hr, but alas, I am a canon girl. Only according to the books. I like all my characters, not just Ron. Hope you will, too. Thanks again. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 08/08/2008 04:13 PM Title: Chapter 15 - An Unlikely Friendship
Okay hopefully Ron changes cause right now... "timid posture" is really unattractive. >_>
Author's Response: Well, you know our Ron, always loosing confidence until it really sinks in to his head!
Date: 08/05/2008 06:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 His First Mission
This is getting more and more interesting. By the way, Ron involved in an adventure, helping Harry or his family is the kind of Ron I like and the one I like to read about. Well done with the scene involving Draco and Hermione, you did a good job describing what was going through Hermione's mind as well as her body's reaction.
Date: 08/02/2008 08:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Proof and Consequences
I was wondered about Harry's logic where Ginny is concerned. Protecting her from whom? Weasleys are 'Muggle lovers', they are friends with The Boy Who Lived and their parents are members of the Order of the Phoenix all of these endangered them all not just Ginny. Regardless of whether or not Harry and Ginny were couple Voldemort had not problems killing them all just for fun anyway. The scene between Harry and Ginny was well done. All the ambivalent feelings were well painted.
Date: 08/02/2008 04:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends and Enemies
I like Ron, I do. He is loyal, brave, even smart but with Hermione? It is your story. Yes, Hermione is very generous and trusting, and I can see why Draco will slither his way into the trio through her but like Hermione I do hope there would be some redemption for Draco at the end.
Author's Response: Dear eterna, Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review. I note that you're only at the beginnings of this story so I would encourage you to keep going because some of your comments will come in to play in later chapters. Thanks again and take care!