Date: 06/29/2009 09:43 AM Title: Underneath It All
I'm so glad to find another of your stories! You have a great style. This particular tale is a great concept. It's sweet and sexy at the same time!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2007 07:30 AM Title: Giving and Receiving
I will say I don't think Ron was with Lavender the day before she broke up with him, he had been hiding from her for week(s) after his poisoning. No, Ron didn't have any kind of sex with Lavender, only Hermione.
[Report This]Date: 03/27/2007 10:00 PM Title: Underneath It All
I like the idea of the two pairs slowly growing in their love and exploration of each other.
So many fics have them shagging almost immediately, because of the pent-up passion... nothing wrong with that, obviously, because smut is always fun. However, it's so nice to read your fics, because you show us the natural progression of relationships.
Thanks for the great chapter. :o)
[Report This]Date: 03/27/2007 09:57 PM Title: Lips on Lips
Oh, I love the idea that Ron kissed someone before Lavender! I really hate that we've been given the impression his first kiss was from her. Thank you for adding in a moment to change that!
Looking forward to seeing where you're going with this! :o)
[Report This]Date: 03/27/2007 08:56 AM Title: Underneath It All
That was great. Harry and Ginny's story made me giggle. Ron and Hermione's was so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2007 04:42 AM Title: Lips on Lips
Very nice, deenas! Funny and honest, and you've got both boys down perfectly!
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2007 11:31 AM Title: Lips on Lips
That was so sweet. I loved Ron's story.