Date: 07/05/2007 08:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is terrific! I am so impressed. The pacing, the dialog...and Neville is perfect. Bravo!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I do love Neville a lot, and I'm glad you liked my fic. i like to consider this one my "Neville Manifesto". :)
Date: 03/21/2007 08:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is really well done. Good characterization of Neville - his fears, his insecurities, and his reactions to his grandmother. I love hearing the backstories on the conversations that JKR doesn't share with us. :)
Author's Response: Oh, I love them too! Thanks for the lovely compliment
--Neville is my future husband...er, I mean favorite character...and I strive to do him justice!
Date: 03/19/2007 09:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was wonderful! I don't see many Neville-centric fics and you pulled this one off beautifully! :o)
I especially liked the inner dialogue when he was trying to decide what to tell her- the lies or the truth.
Really, really nice insight into his character! Bravo! :o)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, as Neville is my absolute favorite character. :)