Reviews For An Ordinary Man
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Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 08:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is terrific!  I am so impressed.  The pacing, the dialog...and Neville is perfect.  Bravo!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!  I do love Neville a lot, and I'm glad you liked my fic.  i like to consider this one my "Neville Manifesto".  :)

Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 08:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is really well done.  Good characterization of Neville - his fears, his insecurities, and his reactions to his grandmother.  I love hearing the backstories on the conversations that JKR doesn't share with us. :)

Author's Response: Oh, I love them too!  Thanks for the lovely compliment
--Neville is my future husband...er, I mean favorite character...and I strive to do him justice!

Reviewer: risiepookie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2007 09:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this was wonderful!  I don't see many Neville-centric fics and you pulled this one off beautifully!  :o) 

I especially liked the inner dialogue when he was trying to decide what to tell her- the lies or the truth. 

Really, really nice insight into his character!  Bravo! :o)



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, as Neville is my absolute favorite character.  :)

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