Reviews For Hatred
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Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 08:36 AM Title: Hatred

Awwww. That is so sweet and so sad!

"His stars just manage to glow even when the Sun is out, and with that hair, he carries the Sun with him, anyway." - so sweet and beautiful.

"Hermione brushed the fringe back from Ron’s forehead, and I felt anger and jealously flare up in me, and heard a voice that screamed, “MINE!” ..... I am afraid that one day, he will turn to Hermione and brush back a strand of her hair in return." -- the unrequited love and the fear is so sad.

Very nicely done.

Author's Response:

thank you very much! this was a difficult prompt for me because i hate seeing the boys parted in any way. i also hated seeing hary just sort of left in the lurch, as it was. but sometimes you just have to let the muse take you where she wants.

thanks again for such wonderful comments!  :D

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