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Reviewer: robin777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2007 08:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was sad. Poor Ron I guess he learned that wishes do sometimes come true.

Reviewer: willowwand Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's so sad. And I suppose we should be careful what we wish for. He got his wish, after all, but he almost died to make it come true. Nice job. :)

Reviewer: kerosinkanister Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, poor Ron.  I like his voice here.

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