Date: 12/02/2007 04:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh this was a bad place to leave it!!!
Nice nice job especially with UST. Did I mention lavender has impecabile timing...
Um, yeah, sorry about the small cliffhanger. More UST coming up! :D
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/2007 01:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
This story is quite excellent. The humor, the tension, and you've got Lavender down pat. I've read every chapter up to here! It's just brilliant! I'm up at 340 because I couldn't stop reading.
I like Ron's voice in this...I think you've done a great job capturing his character and Hermione is just about perfect.
You've done wonderful job incorporating Canon characters in an AU while keeping it very canon if that makes sense. I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, Annie. Sorry you didn't get much sleep though! lol
Date: 11/05/2007 08:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
This chapter was great. I loved the manly perspective on the womanly pain. Love all the interesting situations you are putting them into. Keep up the good work
Hehe! I did enjoy it rather too much I have to say! lol
Thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 04/02/2007 03:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
So sad- that was the last chapter uploaded! I hope there is an update coming soon!!!
I love how you carried on with Hermione ignoring Ron, despite the two of them being almost literally joined at the hip. Very amusing, considering they can't escape from each other.
I'm interested to see if there will be any more side-effects and if they will get worse before they get better or simply fade away...
Well done, mate!!
Date: 04/02/2007 02:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, dear. Ron: open mouth, insert foot. He does seem to have a bit of foot-in-mouth syndrome, and for an entirely not good enough reason, yeah?
Our poor dear Hermione! Although, I know how much you love her, so I know you won't be keeping her miserable for too terribly long! I'm almost sad to move on to the next chapter, because it's the last one you have uploaded and then I'll have to wait like everyone else! :o(
::hugs:: I'm continuing to LOVE this fic!!!
Date: 04/02/2007 02:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm. So, Step, we take two teens in love, two stubborn personalities, two tempers, and put them into a room together... are we just hoping they don't kill each other for the time being?! hehe.
I actually am really enjoying the premise of this fic and the build-up, from the potion, to the illnesses, to moving in together. How often are you planning on updating this? I know you're not finished writing it, but I'm not sure how far along you are.
Well done! ::hugs S::
Date: 04/02/2007 02:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hey S! I loved the dialogue and the back-and-forth banter in this chapter. Really, very cute and funny in several places.
Also, I LOVED the rules!!! Both the set up, and especially the summary: **‘Okay, so in summary, one, no telling, two, no excessive library, three, no excessive Quidditch, four, no excessive snogging and five, scheduled loo breaks.'** LOL!!!!!
The part with Ginny and Harry chatting and plotting about how amusing the situation would be, as well as dealing with Lavender was cute too.
Date: 04/02/2007 02:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
This chapter had several cute moments. Some of my favorites:
**‘And I bet I’m looking beautiful in it!’ she said sarcastically.
‘No less than usual!’ Ron replied. Instantly he blushed and cleared his throat. Hermione only just managed to hide a small smile.**
How like Ron to slip in a compliment without meaning to! And how about this one:
**‘To be honest, I really don’t feel like doing anything so you won’t have to restrain me!’
‘That’s a shame!’ Ron said quietly. He blushed a deep red as soon as he said it. Hermione pretended she hadn’t heard anything.
‘Nothing,’ Ron said quickly.**
I love the sexual innuendo and banter, which they were both completely aware of, but both refused to acknowledge. Had me laughing out loud! And this has to be the best excuse for sticking to each other:
**‘They cannot leave each other’s company. That is to say, that have to be in the same room as each other or they will be rendered unconscious.’**
I loved this chapter! :o) Really well done, my dear.