Date: 04/11/2009 02:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done. I especially liked Ron seeing that Hermione was awake, but not mentioning it to Harry. And the Click...Whirr of the machines was a nice reminder that we were in a muggle hospital room. Hospitals seem so quiet, but, spend the night alone in a room, and you realize how many small noises there are in the background of the general hush.
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2006 01:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a nice trio story. I liked how Ron and Hermione didn't let on that she was awake. This was my fav line:
<i>You know she doesn't leave my side.</i>
Author's Response:
Ah yes, how I love a slightly possessive Ronald Weasley. Glad you like it. Thanks for the review :D
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2006 08:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was really good. The conversation between Hermione and Harry was wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you, the aim of the whole thing wsa to get an angsty 'you won't get rid of us' conversation between the two of them. Glad you enjoyed it! :D
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2006 07:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, the trio! How I love the trio! You very nicely managed to get their personalities and interpersonal dynamics to genuinely come across. Well done!
Author's Response:
Yes the Trio do rule all! Thank you, I try so hard to get their relationship right, so your comments are much appreciated. :D