[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 04:36 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost
One word to describe myself now: shocked!
Yes! I can't tell you how I felt when I read the scene with Harry facing Caroline's body! It was amazing, anyway!
You're doing a great job here and I hope I am in the right way about the thoughts that come after this chapter!
Keep the nice work ok?
Bye!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm curious to know what your thoughts are on what's to come after this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2007 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost
Oh My.. this keeps getting better with each chapter..
Your writing is extremly well paced and not to mention your keeping the emotions and mystery at an all time high..
Its simply becoming impossible to wait for an update....Pls update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to update as often as possible. There should be a short gap between the chapters since I'm writing the final one now (chpt 10) and all the rest have to be sent before my Beta goes to the West End next month! I'm so jealous! LOL, so 7 will be up soon.
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2007 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost
That was great. It did answer some and raise others at least for me. I was afraid something was going to happen to Caroline and I hate that I was right. I liked her.
Author's Response:
Caroline was nice to write. I didn't want to do it but for the sake of the story I needed to. Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked my OC.
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2007 09:58 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Questions
Hello! o/
So, very nice chapter! I must say that now you really made me feel tears in my eyes! Poor Harry... poor Ginny! I hope they find out what's happening.
All this is making me feel completely anxious...
But anyways... very, very nice chapter! This mystery is wonderful! Waiting patiently for the next chapter!
PS.: Just a question, I'm curious... What kind of research are you making to use all these spells? I mean, I'm quite astonished... it's not easy to look for the root of a word and then figure out a spell!
That's a brilliant job, you know!
Always talking too much! =D
o/
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I'm sorry it's making you anxious, because there is more angst to come. :-) As far as the spells are concened. I look up latin words that mean what I'm looking for and sometimes I combine them to make a compound words or just a entirely new word. So all the spells I've used, have actually come from a real latin word. That was easier to me then making up one. I have enough to worry about making up names. I made a boo-boo with a name and that has been killing me, because I gave two characters very similar names and it was such a stupid moment, and by the time I realized it, it was too late! Oh well, what can you do. LOL. Thanks again for the review. Chapter 7 will be up shortly.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 03:49 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Questions
TOTAL love for the very real relationships you are revealing here.
beautiful work.
Q
Author's Response: Thank you! You give great reviews and I appreciate all of them! Chapter 6 will be up shortly.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 03:34 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Fits of Anger
loved the use of "weasel their way in" and i gasped out loud when hermione said "I wasn’t surprised because it’s what I would have done."
as for the rest, all i can say is SHIIIIIIIIT!
Q
Author's Response: Lol, I knew that line would surprise alot of people but I think she explained it well...I hope. Thanks again for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 02:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
yeah. this is worth the rec. though i'm worried at what i'm getting myself into here....
They looked at each other in the mirror for a long moment and suddenly things were not so funny anymore.
"I'm sorry," Harry whispered.
a sorry harry just leaves me gutted.
Ginny was the only thing he'd ever had all to himself.
i love that whole analysis.
Harry only removed his glasses for two things, sleep and sex
teehee
all the stuff at the end has me gobsmacked. the suspense here will do me in i'm sure....
Q
Author's Response: Thanks again for the great review! I loved that scene as well. Ron and Hermione are my favorite to write but I love writing Harry and Ginny in intimate moments as well. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2007 02:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
you've been rec'd by hpaa. i can see why.
Q
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you to hpaa! I will take all the rec's I can get!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2007 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Questions
This was an absolutly awesome chapter....
The first piece with the Harry Ron interection was spot on and heart wrenching....Your doing an awesome job with puring so much emotion, action and mystery into this fic....
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I have to say that, although this chapter was a bit a a filler (meaning it had a load of info) it was one of the hardest ones for me to write thus far. It was emotionally draining a bit but I still loved every miniute of it! Chapter 6 will be up shortly!
Date: 01/25/2007 08:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
Wow...I've never been called a "Comma Commando" before (blushes) but I guess it fits. But don't sweat it, I've always heard few creative geniuses ever punctuate while they write.
I love this story, so being your beta is a really great job for me. It means I get to be among the first to read!!!
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thought you'd like that...I also toyed with Punctuation Princess, or Grammar Goddess! LOL. I think you can wear all three titles simultaniously! Thanks for the review, and the great work you do.
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2007 08:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Questions
Excellent, written very much in character for all 4. Easy to read, the story is rolling along very nicely in my opinion. Look forward to the next chapter, don't keep up waiting!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I will try to have the next chapter up asap!
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Fits of Anger
Someone's poisioning him.
Author's Response:
I assume that's not a question-LOL, so I won't answer it. I'll just say, the mystery isn't so much what is happening to Harry but why and by whom. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/15/2007 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Fits of Anger
Oh! Forget my mistakes ok?
I was so excited to review! o
Author's Response: LOL, no problem!
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 09:54 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Fits of Anger
Hello! ^.^
Well, this chapter has given me everything I was looking for: mystery and something to try on!
First: I really love the mystery here and I am quite horrified with Harry. I don't know what's going on with him but if every person around him say something that makes him angry, he'll kill the world! I don't know if this makes sense, but I thought about it!
Second: But if he doesn't kill all the world I'll killl him by myself... how does he do such a thing with Ginny? I felt her desperation... and I almost wanted to jump into the computer to help her! I felt so bad!
Third: Blond woman here and blond woman in the second chapter. Why did I thought about her when Ron was explaining Harry's behavior to Hermione? I love theories and I have this: she has something to do with Harry's odd reactions! I have to say that I'm even more intrigued now! That's why I am anxious to the next chapter! But take your time ok?
Good luck!
And great job! o/
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm not sure what you mean about Harry killing the world, but Harry is suffering from some outside force making him do things outside of his nature. It's not simply because he is angry. I'm not sure what blond woman you are referring to, maybe you meant the pale woman, but her hair is black. Chapter 5 and 6 should clear somethings up for you, but I like that you have many theories! Thanks again for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2007 06:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Fits of Anger
Your building the suspense up brilliantly... I can't wait for an update
Author's Response: Thank you! chapter 5 is out to beta now and I'm almost finished writing chapter 7 so there should be updates rather quickly.