Date: 03/13/2007 07:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Face of Evil
Ok Karen, it's been a long, long time since the last time I've read something so powerful. I don't know what to say to you about the way I was feeling while reading all the conversation. Specially because I am still speechless because of Ron's words. Do you have any idea what you've done here? How could you write something so powerful, romantic, and sensual. Really this is, from now, one of my favorite R/Hr chapters ever.
Oh, talking about Bella and H/G... You've done a brilliant villain. She's like her mother, but she's worst... o/ And I love this characters! o
And I'm anxious to know how Harry will surpass this. I'm not his greastest fan, but I like him. A lot! ^^
So, now I'll go. Still speechless and proud to be reading your story. Good luck with the last one **cries**!
Oh wow! That was simply a beautiful review and it made my heart smile. Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this story. I hope you continue to love this story once it is complete. It is hard ending anything and this story has been simply love for me.
It's funny about Isabella, she was not fully fleshed out in the beginning. I initially had her more angry and wanting revenge but she unfolded as more sad and deranged. It's funny how that happens sometimes, but I am pleased by how she came about. I was intent to have an OC as the villian because I didn't trust myself to come up with a motive original enough to use the standard villian like Draco/Lucius or anyone else. (Plus I think Draco is more 3 dimensional than to still want to be involved in the Trio's life after all these years. I may write something with him later though*smile*) So again, thank you for the lovely review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 03/11/2007 05:34 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Face of Evil
OMG! What a chapter!!
You make me cry with Ron and Hermione! I really felt all the pain and despair. I hope they can make through it!!
I loved Isabella!! She is really crazy, and despite the situation, I thought it was a little funny! But that ended when she forced Harry to drink the potion, and I´m really worried about Ginny!! Please, let Ron get there in time!!
Anyway, your story is wonderful!! I love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I gather that most would think some of Isabella's statements would be funny. I'd think that if they weren't in that situation, Harry and Ginny might chuckle a bit. Seeing as they are scared for their lives, it seemed inapropriate-lol. Chapter 10 will let you get in Hermione's head a bit, for those of you that were a bit ticked off at her reaction to Ron.
Date: 03/11/2007 02:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Face of Evil
Oh you are just evil to leave us hanging like this! Of course Ron isn't reading Ginny's letter, he's comforting Hermione! Arg!
Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm rotten to the core, but alas our lovely Ron will eventually pull his head out of...the sand and tend to what needs to be done. Thanks for the review! 10 will be along shortly.
Date: 03/10/2007 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Face of Evil
Wait, Ron saying that he knew the second she walked in but didn't care because of fatigue? Being tired makes it ok?
Great chapter by the way. Cant wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: No, Ron said he'd figured it out only a second before the real Hermione walked in...big difference...he was saying the fatigue was what kept him from figuring it out a lot sooner. (God, I hope that's what I wrote *dashes back to check*) Thanks for the review! Hope that clears it up for you.
Date: 03/10/2007 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Face of Evil
ron/hermione - you really captured that dynamic when a relationship is balanced on a knife edge. the pain was very real.
harry/ginny- they're both fighters! they'll find a way to beat this thing!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you like the last chapter as well.
Date: 03/01/2007 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Missing Pieces
If you keep up ending the chapters like this, I'll faint! I'm sure of it!
I'm joking! =D
Very nice chapter! I was missing Harry... just realized it now! And even if I don't like him so much I still feel sad for him... poor man! Only Ginny to understand him. You know, your Harry and Ginny are perfect together! *.*
About the chapter: Awesome! I'm quite shocked with this revelation about Bella's daughter. But now makes sense! Revenge? Why?! Questions... so many questions!
Anyway, very nice chapter! I'm just wondering what Ron will do to fix the things with Hermione. But I'm sure they'll make up! *.*
Very nice work, Karen! See ya!
Author's Response: Thank you! How can you not like Harry so much? He's the best! (next to Ron, of course-lol). Never fear, all of your questions will be answered in chapter 9. And Ron will do his best to fix things...rest assured!
Date: 02/28/2007 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Missing Pieces
That was wonderful. The Harry/Ginny was so sad and hot.
I felt so sorry for Ron and for Hermione.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! It will get a little worse for Ron and Hermione in chapter 9, sorry to say, but let's keep our fingers crossed that they will get better. :-)
Date: 02/28/2007 08:09 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Missing Pieces
What the ...? You sure packed a lot into this chapter! Ron captures a prime suspect, Ginny finds Harry, Ginny's pregnant, and Harry is ... paralyzed? What next? Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL. Well it didn't seem like that much to me when I wrote it, but when you put it that way...lol. I sure hope no one reads that before they read the chapter because you just summed up the whole thing in one sentence! LOL
Date: 02/28/2007 06:56 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Missing Pieces
Firstly, the portion of ur authors notes that you wanted deleted has not been deleted, you may want to clear that up.... and Secondly... WHAT in gods name is going on....
How you manage to keep the same level of suspense in each chapter is astounding....
Author's Response: Thank you, got that cleared up right away! And thank you again, there is a bit more suspence to come, but you got some anweres in this chapter, so that should be good.
Date: 02/22/2007 09:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Turning Over Stones
I... I... I am completely stunned! What a chapter! I must say that I don't like to see Ginny suffering... she's one of my favorites characters and see her in this state is so... bad! But I understand and I know the future might be better! I hope, of course!
So... it's true, I felt all the agony in this chapter (I don't know if it was really agony, but anyway!)... And it's strange to read without Harry around... different!
Well, anyway... it was a very good chapter even if I am still thinking who's this person who had walked into the room and what happened to Hermione...
Very nice... keep the nice work! o/
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I know Ginny is getting the brunt of it in this chapter, but she will be gathering herself together soon. Chapter 8 will be up shortly...hopefully by the beginning of the week! Thanks again!
Date: 02/18/2007 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Turning Over Stones
Excellent !!! I have no better words to describe this update.....
Needless to say it has left me speechless...... ur writing style is amazing :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I knew this chapter would stir up some trouble, but I'm glad you liked it. Chapter 8 will be along shortly.
Date: 02/04/2007 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost
I'm enjoying this story tremendously. The dynamics in Hermione and Ron's marriage fit well with the canon characters.
My only bit of concrit is watch your apostrophes. I noticed several used incorrectly.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I love writing Ron and Hermione and try to make it seem as canon as I can. As far as the apostrophes are concerned, my beta and I try very hard to catch everything (my beta more than I, seeing as she is wonderful at punctuation) however, we do miss somethings, unfortunately. Mainly due to fatigue and having read each chapter 10 times (on my part) I'll glaze over mistakes often. All the same, I hope it hasn't interupted your reading pleasure.