[Report This]Date: 07/17/2007 05:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
Oh my gosh that was just incredible! And sooo hot and steamy. Your love/sex scenes never cease to amaze me. And as much as I love all of JK's other characters, I'm just soo happy to see that this story focused on the four of them. It was simply beautiful. Now that I have read all three stories in the series I find that I'm anxious for more! Are you planning on writing anything else in this universe? This was really a fantastic and wonderfully written story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that fantastic review! Unfortunately, I will be taking a break from fan fiction to focus on my original work, so Transitions will be my last story in the fandom world for a while. Sorry.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 06:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - An Excessive Use of Force
Ohhhhh very nerve wracking! Love the suspense. Poor Harry, he has no clue what he did, does he?
Author's Response: Nope, he doesn't but he will eventually! Let's see if you can figure it out...don't read the reviews if you want to be surprised! Thanks for leaving one though...love it!
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 06:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough
Ok I'm in love with this already and it's only the first chapter. LoL. The banter between the Trio is hilarious.
Author's Response: Thank you, I love that you are reading them all. Hope you love the series! And feel free to review every chapter! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2007 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
APPLAUSE! APPLAUSE! Please stand and take your bow. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you! *bows gracefully* Please...please sit down! LOL, Just kidding. Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2007 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Fear
Ok, I just found Four Days of Fantasies last night and read it. Now I am reading this and I have to say you're a great storyteller. Your story has moved me to laughter and to tears and after all isn't that what writing is all about? Evoking emotions. I love this story and I am looking forward to finishing this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it and check out Transitions too! Thanks again for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2007 03:42 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
A simply outstanding piece of literature. You haven't tried to simply copy Jk Rowling's style and instead you seem to have refreshed her characters with your own (smutty!) style. They're th characters we know and love with all their familiar characterisitcs, but you've made a transistion the between adults in your story and the children in the books.
The passage between Ron and hermione in chapter 9 is easily my favourite and is a powerful testament to quite how good a writer you are. I thorougly enjoyed reading and keep it up!
Author's Response: Well thank you for such a lovely review! I'm still surprised when I get one for Bonded because it's not new anymore, but I guess it will be new to someone all the time. Thank you again, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2007 04:53 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
Loved it! you're a great author...you have great story lines and all your stories are not just smut...not that i would have a serious objection to that ;]
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's my favorite of the series.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2007 03:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Fits of Anger
Really great writing. You have a natural gift for character interaction, and you are especially good at creating tension.
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2007 08:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
You already know I loved it all, but I thought I should tell you "officially" anyway.
I'm glad I picked up your story as well, because I already feel like we've been friends forever. I think we've "bonded" over the course of your story and I'm looking forward to pursuing some of the common interests we've been discussing recently!
Keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Aww...*wipes away tear* You already know I appreciate all of your help but I'll say it again! THANK YOU!!!! And I agree we have "bonded" over these few months. So now, I'm off to write our real story....because I know what you mean with "Keep writing!!!" LOL
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2007 09:28 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
Yeah! I should know you'd give a great end to Bonded. Well, I think I haven't told you before, but I really enjoy reading your Ron and Hermione. They're just like I love to read. A strong love and a bit of annoying to one another! XD Perfect the first part and their chat about babies! Very good!
Oh, about Harry... I guess I like him more now than before, specially because he suffered a lot and even though I don't like him, I want him alive and happy in the end of Deathly Hallows! He deserves... and Ginny as well. ^^
And the very end... lovely! I really like Ethan and I was hoping this to happen.
A very well done job and I'll be here waiting for Transitions. I'm sure it's going to be very good (Drama? Hell, yeah!! o/).
Hugs,
Bety.
Author's Response: Thank you!, I'm still floored that you don't like Harry! How can that be? *sratches head* I'm happy that my story has made you like him a bit more.LOL! I love Harry, but Ron is my man all the way! I hope you enjoy my next story, it will be up (if approved) in a few weeks.
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2007 06:15 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
Exciting and touching ending. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03/25/2007 07:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
AWWW I love this story! Good job! Everything was awesome. Mucho Kudos!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 03/25/2007 04:17 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
That was wonderful. I loved the ending and I'm glad Ethan is going to be staying with Harry and Ginny.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/25/2007 03:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bonding
Great story! I like the way you tied up the loose ends. Although not exactly happy ever after, everyone is safe and sane, which is saying a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you, I do try not to be too sappy with the endings but it is hard for me as I am a big sap! LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2007 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Face of Evil
You're killing me with all this waiting!! I really, really want to know what happens! Will there be an update soon?
Author's Response: I'm sorry but my beta still has it...it is pretty long. I will send her an email right now and see when she will have it back to me! Hang tight...I'll be right back