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Reviewer: queenb23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2006 07:21 PM Title: Forever Autumn

This is so beautiful - the vision of the leaves falling three times is excellent!!


Author's Response: It's a technique I find useful in drabbles, repetition. It's very effective when you have few words to play with.

Reviewer: risiepookie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2006 11:12 PM Title: Forever Autumn

hehe.  the whole family is just waiting for it, aren't they?  What good brothers!

very nice!



Author's Response: I think the whole OOTP is waiting for it....

Reviewer: robin777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2006 08:46 PM Title: Forever Autumn

That was lovely.


Author's Response: Thank you

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