Reviews For Breathing Room
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Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 05:13 PM Title: Everything for the Future

They're so cute together, and so angsty. And the two freaking out about Remus' parents was priceless. Amazing story...hope there's more to come *wink*

Author's Response: Hee - I like awkwards moments like meeting the parents.  It's nice to have some humor amongst angst and war.  

Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 12:41 PM Title: Everything for the Future

That was precious...

It kept me glued to the computer till I read the very last word...

I hope you have a sequal planned :)

Author's Response: A sequel?  Gosh, I don't know!  I'm not sure what else to write aboutin this series.  B/c "Breathing Room" is a sequel itself.    

Reviewer: mapleandmahogany Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 08:50 PM Title: Remembering Yesterday

You are doing very well with the boys here. I'm enjoying this a lot. They still have so much confusion and caution for having been together for so long. I constantly want to *thwap* them for being so silly. I just adored Sirius' conversation with James here. I was so excited about the part with Remus's mother. Oh - and all the smooshy, tender loving, I could read and more and more of that. AND - I liked how Sirius made James turn around so he could kiss Remus. LOL - well done. 

Author's Response: What a great review!  Yeah, I wanted to have some loving moments b/c I can't give them a hug and really - sometiems R and S just need some *love*    

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 10:51 AM Title: Remembering Yesterday

Uh oh, Lily's pregnant...that means their time is limited. It's so sad when you know what's going to happen. Loved Remus' shock at the idea of making Christmas dinner and Sirius going to Lily for help...that's love.

Oh, and in case I didn't mention it before, there is nothing hotter than a bisexual!Remus..hehe

Reviewer: Saradoc Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 08:54 PM Title: Part II: Living Today

Brillent! Your characterizations are spot on, and I love the way you've written the Remus/Sirus interactions. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ElizaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 09:05 PM Title: Remembering Yesterday

I loved it. I loved The Sharing of Breath too. Beautiful stories, more realistic than the other kinds you see out there. It's taken these two years to get together and they still have problems. Sirius' character is very pensieve, but fun all the same. Lucky Remus :o)~

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked it.  I did try for realism, the best I could considering they're wizards and I"ve no idea what it's like to be a gay man.  There's still 3 more chapters, so look for them :)    

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