Date: 10/16/2006 05:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was fantastic. Great job with Hermione's emotions. I thought the characterizations (even the tiny glimpse we have of Ron) was spot on.
And before you completely lose your mind, while crushing him against you and wrapping your arms around his neck, you wonder if he'll tell Harry how you making the first, feral move was a little disturbing.
Not a chance. He LOVED it. ;)
Thank You so very much!
I love writing about her emotions, and getting both her and Ron all flustered...
Thanks for reading and reviewing =)