Date: 10/13/2006 07:05 AM Title: Prologue
Q - this is absolutely wonderful! I am in complete shock!
This is so beautiful! All three of them are so perfectly in character. Ron is so tender and loving.
I am so excited about this story. I can't wait to see them move on from this and how they become a family.
Q- I'm so proud of you for writing this and having the courage to post it!
thanks for reading it, sweety.
Date: 10/13/2006 03:06 AM Title: Prologue
Wow. As always I love stories written from Harry's point of view and this is one which is right up there with the best of them. You have captured Harry's personality so well. The language of the whole story was simple, yet so effective.
I really am blown away by this (adding to favourites straight away.
Author's Response: wow. thanks so much. glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/13/2006 01:53 AM Title: Prologue
Very, very nicely done - I'm impressed.
It is what it is. We are both okay with it. Don’t make it more complicated than it is already.
That's just right = Ron is so wise sometimes.
Author's Response: yay. glad you enjoyed that.
Date: 10/13/2006 01:46 AM Title: Prologue
Quizz! You've written! *flails* This is beautiful!
"he turns to the long gentle man beside him" *sigh* *melts*
I'm am so excited for you, and I can't wait to read more from you!
thanks so much.
Author's Response: by the way i'm flailing all over the place. :P
Date: 10/13/2006 01:31 AM Title: Prologue
Oh, my God!
This is so very wonderful, so warm, so moving, so touching. Everyone's wonderfully themselves.
Your sparse, sere prose gives us an echo of the desolation of Harry's broken soul, and teh warmth and love of Ron and Hermione gradually shine through that fog.
I'm so glad I helped you bring this here, and so glad that more folks are going to get to see it.
you'll get your commission later.....