Date: 10/16/2006 06:17 PM Title: Hogwarts In Danger
I really like the story so far. I especially liked the history of the marauder's map. I don't know why, but I love when author's make a reference to tonks and charlie being friends (or more than that) when they were at hogwarts. Please update soon.
Thanks for another review =)
To me, the Marauder's Map HAD to have been passed down 'generation to generation'. It's just too good to pass up!
Charlie and Tonks are the same age (if you do the math). I don't mind Charlie/Tonks, but for some reason, they scream friends to me, not lovers. Like Harry and Hermione...
Thevina has ch4...but this story is cross-posted to SugarQuill and FF.net. They both have up to ch6.
I was just introduced to TQP.
Thanks for reading still =)
Date: 10/12/2006 08:23 PM Title: On the Muggle Train
I just had time to sit down and read both of your chapters and I wanted you to know how thoroughly I enjoyed them.
You have done a wonderful job at portraying the trio as teens and I really already feel connected to your Ron, Harry and Hermione.
I chuckled for quite a while at the interaction between all the siblings at the Burrow. Very *real* and nicely written.
Keep up the great work.
I'm glad you're enjoying so far. Ch3 is with the beta, but she's on holiday. I like to think the my own teenage years weren't so long ago, however...
But sibling interaction never changes, if you're 5 or 35!
Hope you keep reading =)
Date: 10/10/2006 01:26 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Surprise At Home
Your story is pretty good so far. But, please make paragraphs and space the dialogue, it's hard to read in one lump.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
I just noticed that. Will alert the mods =)