Reviews For Pretense
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Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 01:51 PM Title: Pretense

Sigh.  This is as perfectly wonderful today as it was the first time I read it.

Reviewer: hermionenessie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2009 08:15 AM Title: Pretense

wow. fantastic!

Reviewer: iris m Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 04:56 PM Title: Pretense

omg was this good.

Reviewer: TrixieBerry13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 08:31 AM Title: Pretense

I just love running into wonderful stories like this one. It justmakes my day. =)

Reviewer: dumdoc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2009 06:58 AM Title: Pretense

Finally! Nice, thanks.

Reviewer: risiepookie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 09:24 PM Title: Pretense

when it's hard to start living their lives again, they *finally* come together. 

simply lovely.

Reviewer: RonHermione33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 07:12 PM Title: Pretense

Wow!  I can imagine that it will be just this intense, as you have conveyed in your story, when Ron and Hermione do finally declare their love for each other and come together as one. Very, very well done!


Reviewer: Attila Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2006 09:05 AM Title: Pretense

Fantastic!  Really tugs the heartstrings.

He doesn’t mean today now. He means now that it’s all behind us, now that we’re finally at this place at the same time, now that we’re ready to start a new chapter. And she knows exactly what he means.



I really loved this. 

Reviewer: LadyEcho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 10:55 PM Title: Pretense

Very interesting concept.  It'd be interesting to explore the whole thing.  I really loved the line that he tried not to run to her.  It's such a powerful image to think of someone running to you because they love you so much they can't stand to be away.

Reviewer: Ninang02 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 09:20 PM Title: Pretense

This was an excellent read!  You've done a beautiful job of capturing their emotions.

~It’s not the scene she’s imagined. She knows they are skipping over important things. There should be slow explorations, and whispered endearments and promises. But it all seems rather unnecessary.~  I completely agree!

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 09:19 AM Title: Pretense

Yes,” she says, and then, “finally.”

Wow! i loved reading this so much!

You did so well the angst, the hesitation and the resolution.

Very sweet and hot!

Congrats and thank you for a wonderful reading :)

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