Date: 10/08/2006 07:12 PM Title: Pretense
Wow! I can imagine that it will be just this intense, as you have conveyed in your story, when Ron and Hermione do finally declare their love for each other and come together as one. Very, very well done!
RON & HERMIONE, ALWAYS!
Date: 10/08/2006 09:05 AM Title: Pretense
Fantastic! Really tugs the heartstrings.
He doesn’t mean today now. He means now that it’s all behind us, now that we’re finally at this place at the same time, now that we’re ready to start a new chapter. And she knows exactly what he means.
I really loved this.
Date: 10/02/2006 10:55 PM Title: Pretense
Very interesting concept. It'd be interesting to explore the whole thing. I really loved the line that he tried not to run to her. It's such a powerful image to think of someone running to you because they love you so much they can't stand to be away.
Date: 09/30/2006 09:20 PM Title: Pretense
This was an excellent read! You've done a beautiful job of capturing their emotions.
~It’s not the scene she’s imagined. She knows they are skipping over important things. There should be slow explorations, and whispered endearments and promises. But it all seems rather unnecessary.~ I completely agree!