Date: 01/13/2007 09:32 PM Title: Add Nausea
Oh boy do I ever agree with you. I will leave feedback for the first two chapters. I'm loving it, I had to leave a comment here to lety you know I agree with you. They are both allowing themselves to enjoy what they've wanted for so long. I love the way you allow them to talk freely with each other about their thoughts and feelings have been, they are friend's after all so it wuld be evident they would be comfortable enough to be forward and yet hesitant. They know they've crossed the line of friendship, into lovers so they are weary about how it will all turn out and like you said they feel bad for having Lavender in the middle of all this. Great job.
Author's Response: You're right, theres just so much risk and so much reward....but hopefully love will see them through
Date: 11/03/2006 10:03 PM Title: Secrets
i am really enjoying this. I especially loved the part where Bill knocks Ron in the water. It reminded me of a running gag in a Nora Roberts series where all the older brothers keep knocking or thowing the youngest into the water.
Looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Don't know that series, but thanks for the review.