Date: 09/16/2006 10:14 AM Title: Hallway Scene
OK, I always have to "swallow a lump" of plot when Ron steps gallantly aside for Harry, but the quality of your writing made that lump go down smooth.
The interplay between Harry and Hermione, that moment of recognition when Harry catches Hermione from falling. The fact that, if Ron were to step aside for Harry, he'd do it exactly like that...
Great, great story!