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Reviewer: Seersha Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 12:39 PM Title: A Trail of Persimmon

Oh this was lovely! I wonder if you can be convinced to continue the story? Anyway, I really enjoyed reading it. Well done.

Reviewer: dumdoc Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2008 04:42 AM Title: A Trail of Persimmon

Nicely delineated.

Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 01:24 PM Title: A Trail of Persimmon

Lovely, lovely.  Excellent from start to finish.  I especialy loved this line:He was undone and rebound,  What an excellent line.

Author's Response: Many thanks for your kind words! That particular line really resonated with one of my betas as well; I'm so glad it's effective and conveyed Harry's change in an eloquent way. Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

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