Date: 08/25/2006 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way you portray Adrian - I really do. This story was so cute; Hermione's insecurities were dead-on, and I love how you play the two of them off each other - his sexy confidence makes the perfect foil in such a naughty situation ;-)
Very sexy and yet sweet. The established romance is not usually my favourite genre, but you always do it so well!