Date: 09/26/2006 05:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this piece is just tearing my heart out. Look, you can borrow my Empty Universe from "Wnwinnavle Fight" for asd long as it takes. Chuck 'em in, and leave 'em in until they just pull those sticks out and frikkin' talk to one another!
Date: 09/26/2006 04:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm...Even more intruiging than the last one. Seem to be stepping in the right direction don't we? Pushing Gus away and challenging Ron.
Date: 09/26/2006 04:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ahhh, awsome chapter. Just love this story to death. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 09/07/2006 04:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful so far :)
Bully for Hermione for moving on...er, sort of. Please tell me Ron's not as clueless as he seems.
I demand (:D) an update soon! No 'distractions' at home now!
Date: 09/06/2006 02:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ron loves Hermione.She is his true love , his soulmate so he resists to naiads.They being all ginger blocks the effect too...Am I right?
Oh P, I loved so much this chapter.The scene between Hermione and Gus was lovelly and sexy, who resists to a bloke like him?
He made her going out with Ron!Gus is adorable indeed :)
And don´t worry, I loved the tone of this chapter and I think I m not only one ;)
The naiads scene was very creative and it has so many hints about our Ron´s feelings and motivations.When someone focus so hard on its job, many times it´s for forget a failed love....;)
You ´ve done a excellent job with Hermione, I love how her mind tricks her,I mean her love for Ron is so obvious that in the moment Ron enter inside the same place she is, she focus only on him.She wants hide it but she cant..."You can run but you can´t hide"heheh
I love how Ron was a mature, calm and smart man :)
*drools over P´s sexy Ron*
He talks so much with his body, I mean, it´s fabulous how his body language says so much about his feelings about Hermione.And she ....melts totally:
So let see why I think this:
* Her jealous about fan girls
*She wanting go with him.She simply could ask him for bring some naiads hair ,You know what I mean....
*She rubbing his arms for warm them, she didn´t need do it.Unless she wants touch him and that was really what she wanted....poor things, so much UST on way!
*She not wanting go away from him.
*She forgot why she went with him
And Ron´s hint about the nature of their relationship for she could go with him was priceless, poor bloke
I think I get the reason of Ron´s Hesitation about Hermione:he couldn´t believe he found his soul mate and the love of his life at eleven years old age...
Ron never be in love with Wendy.
Argh, I think Hermione didn´t get it yet...
Ron always be in love with her
*give me Hermione´s phone number, I talk with her*
Can´t wait for know more, as usual :)
*Spider waits with patience*
I ´m thiking post this rewiew on CM foruns ,only waiting for someone begins the discussion of chapter 5