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Reviewer: Champion_Shoes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 09:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

This has got to be one of my favorite fan fictions that I have ever read. I cried! You did an excellent job! You write really well.

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 09:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Briliant job :)

I loved how you wrote R and Hr so ic :)

Beautiful R/Hr suff

Thanks!



Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: zebraspots05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 09:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow. I wish I could say something that would do justice to this wonderful little story, but there are not words enough! This is absolutely perfect; I know that it will be remembered everytime there is a stormy night.  Thank you so much for sharing with us

 



Author's Response: Wow.Thank you for leaving this wonderful review. I am happy to share it.

Reviewer: Gracierose Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 09:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

You know how much I love this story.  I wanted to tell you again though how wonderfully written it is.  Your descriptions of the sounds and surroundings in the room are wonderful.  Well done again.

Author's Response: Thanks. I could have never written it without you. Thanks for pushing me and showing me how much better it could be. 

Reviewer: alloy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 02:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice and touching....well done

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: willowwand Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was beautiful. It was such a lovely story. I cried when Hermione said that at six years old she decided to push herself so that her parents would never be disappointed in her again. Well done.

Author's Response: I wanted to explore a reason why she is so driven. I think there are many reasons and I tried to include some in the story but I wanted the main focus to be her parents. Thank you for your kind words. 

Reviewer: oldbookworm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 09:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was simply beautiful. The picture you painted with words was amazing. I can ‘see’ every move hear every breath. Love is often complex and sometimes if you ignore the complexities you get perfect moments that you depicted both with her parents and with the two couples. This was out standing.  



Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. You are right love is often complex and I think that sometimes in fiction, and in life, you need to ignore that in order to really have a moment that you- and others need. If that makes sense at all. Again thank you. 

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