Date: 07/25/2006 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like how nervous Ron was while talking to her :)
I have a feeling it won't be that easy for them to say what they're feeling in the last book, we all know how mean JKR can be ;-)
This is a wonderful first story Mench!!!
Yeah, I think JKR would make Ron stammer (with all his cuteness, I may add) and babble useless things to Hermione before saying those three words. Let's hope Harry would hear it. *winks*
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
Date: 07/25/2006 09:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's so cute! You wrote Ron almost exactly like how I though he would be. Great job!
Author's Response: He's really cute, the way he drabbles. :)
Date: 07/25/2006 09:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww,that´s so sweet!
I loved how Ron got the courage for says to her he loves her, even his hesitation on words choice, so Ron ish :)
And I love the ´begin a family together hints :love:
A nice and good first one,Mench :)
Author's Response: I've been impatient with JKR putting it off until the last book (I know it will happen) so I made him say it to her now. *smiles*
Date: 07/25/2006 09:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
ah, that was sweet! I like how you did the dialogue. It was very natural flowing, which is diffciult when they're talking from the heart. I loved this: "I think I’m in love with you, actually… well, I don’t think it… I know it." Very well done! Loved the future talk of a family too. It's a very hopeful piece.. congrats on your first one!
You don't know how your review made me feel =). Thanks so much!