



[Report This]Date: 07/06/2006 07:58 PM Title: Turn One - Miss Ginny, a Bone to Pick
Dear Intrusive Narrator, please tell your author that this reader was happy to miss any interactions between brother and sister...she is not alone in her squeamishness at all.




[Report This]Date: 07/06/2006 07:52 PM Title: Turn Four - Harry and Ron, Run, and Catch Up
I'll just tell you what I told my hubby: Sometimes you read a story, and its funny and light and a bit crack-y, then wham, you are hit with a hauntingly touching chapter which will stay with you for a long time. This is one of those stories.
The inclusion of the narrator was a stroke of genius. This last chapter wouldn't have made as much sense without it.
Great Job.