Date: 12/23/2009 09:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
Holy crap, this is awesome. I discovered this fic around six this morning. It is now 8:32, and I've been reading the whole time. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I love the conflict between Ron and Hermione, the subplot of Ginny's orphanage, and, I'll be honest, Daddy!Ron is just about swoon worthy. I almost cried when I realized how long it's been since the last update, because I really really want to know what happens next. Fantastic job- I can't wait for more!
Date: 10/19/2009 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hey! I found a snippet of your story on LJ, and followed it here. Seriously, this is probably only the second R/H I've read 'cuz UI'm a big L/J fan.
While the plot is decidedly cliché, I love your characterisation. Hermione and Harry are perfectly in character; Ron is different, but you've explained that, and I love alpha male leads anyways. But my absolute favourite is Ginny. She's amazingly spunky. Normally I don't like to see two tracks running parallel to each other but here I don't mind the H/G at all.
I thought that Mrs. Weasley, and Hermione's equation with the Weasley family was a bit off. I mean, she's s'posed to be so close to them, practically a part of the family, and I don't remember Mrs. Weasley being such a... I don't know, self involved bitch. But I guess this is AU, so it's cool.
Again, I love this story, and can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
Date: 09/01/2009 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just read this story again and it still has me on the edge of my seat. As I've told you before, this was one of the first HP fanfics I ever read and it continues to be one of my absolute favorites! Thanks again for sharing such story writing talent with all of us!
Date: 08/30/2009 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
This story is AMAZING! When I first stumbled on it, I read for hours straight! You really have a feel for the characters and the dialogue is so natural. I'm afraid that Hermione might sacrifice herself in the end and so we won't see the happy ending for her and Ron, but wherever your muse takes you is where you must go! More, please! :-)
Date: 08/30/2009 06:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
PLeaseeee keep writing for this story!!! I love it so much! Youve done such a great job, and I love reading every word in the story! Ive actually read it 3-4 times probably. I know you havnt updated it in a while, but I hope you see this review and pick it up again! I love it!!
Date: 08/08/2009 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bluerain - this story is simply stunningly amazing! I love how the characters are well-developed, not just because they are from HP. This story resonates, and not just because the characters are Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Harry, and others from HP. This could not be a HP fanfic, and I would still adore this novella. I was hooked from chapter 1, and spent a few hours reading 1-25 in one sitting. Please finish this story. I would like to know how Hermione's research turned out, why Ron's office was broken into, and does Malfoy have a darker role, or is he just the impetus for Ron and Hermione getting together. This is the first fanfic of yours I've read, and I definitely be reading others.