Date: 01/29/2007 04:10 PM Title: Chapter 5: Ron
Wow, this story is so brilliantly woven, and so hauntingly sad and beautiful. Everyone is so true to character and you really captured the spirit of Ron's sacrifice, and what it really means for everyone whose lives he has touched. Great job.
Date: 07/14/2006 08:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Molly
Wow. I am sitting here surrounded with tissues. This is so amazing, so insightful and heartbreaking. I loved the image of the family sitting together, but so numb that they can't reach out for each other. And the funeral scene in Ginny's dream was heartbreaking as well, in its accurate portrayal of people dealing with such a shock. Also, the way you weaved the present with the past memories was well done. Good job!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I'm so pleased it touched you.