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Reviewer: tabitoo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 02:33 PM Title: Expectations

I love this story.  Once it catches up with what's posted at Checkmated, will you continue with the story at both sites????  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: mslupin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 01:54 PM Title: Expectations

I really like this chapter.  Matter of fact it is one of my favorites now.  I like that Ron get the chance to prove something to himself that he is not a losser.  Drana told him is was lazy I wanted to stand up and clap. (I did not because Iam at work.)  Keep up the good work.  I hope Lupin gets some lov'n, too.

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 11:27 AM Title: And It All Came Tumbling Down

Well, Harry seems to be doing better and Ron just digs himself a deeper hole!  Loved the part with Hermione, Parvati and Lavender!  I am SO anxious for them to put their plan in action!

Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 07:07 PM Title: And It All Came Tumbling Down

Enough of the angst already!!!!  Give them - and us - a break!

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 07:34 PM Title: Regrettable Decisions

Oh, at lasst, AT LAST!!  the kiss, the kiss!!  a most entertaining chapter!

Reviewer: Huesos_Potter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2006 08:32 PM Title: Strange

nice chap... excellent like always... esperando el que sigue (waiting the next one)...

Reviewer: Bar Bar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 06:00 PM Title: Last Chance

I love this story so much! its so well written and it makes me laugh and cry, and i just love it! please update it soon! ill be eternally grateful

Love Trilian

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 02:01 PM Title: With Age, Wisdom?

A wonderful chapter, the four women really letting it all out.  Loved the background story on Tonks and Bill, Adrianna and Charlie.  So, Hermione is now in love and Ginny still thinks Harry is a prat.  So, is Ginny going to find the courage to confront Harry about his 'pratiness?"

Reviewer: pettybureaucrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 12:24 PM Title: The Tide of Change

Harry seems to be digging himself a deeper hole every time he's 'noble.'  I love the sniping between Bill, Nymph and Adrianna.  Somehow I feel detention will end up being less of a punishment to Ginny than she thinks.  Now, is Bill going to be a 'decent' brother or just make Ron feel even more inadequate?  Excellent chapter, great story.

Reviewer: Taja Reyul Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2006 04:31 PM Title: Back to Reality

</i>Hermione shrugged, not having a good answer to give her. Ginny must have sensed how out of sorts Hermione was, because she sighed, her annoyance melting away and her face taking on a look of <b>commissary</b> as she weaved her arm through Hermione’s. </i>

 

I think you mean "commiseration".  I've noticed a few word-choice errors here and there, but I'm fascinated by your story.

Reviewer: SillyGillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2006 07:12 PM Title: Back to Reality

OH NO! No cliffies, so evil!!! Brilliant job update as soon as you can!

Reviewer: wcuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 10:37 AM Title: Distinctions

I love this story!!! Hermione and Ron's vicious fight simply broke my heart( I've read a few chapters ahead on Checkmated) when will chapter 50 post, I'm dying over here, lol

Reviewer: fictionfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 05:05 PM Title: Desperate Minds

Wow

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Date: 09/12/2006 07:50 PM Title: Regrettable Decisions

excellent

Reviewer: kkf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 02:49 PM Title: With Age, Wisdom?

...and the plot thickens...

I love it.  Thank you for the update! 

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