Date: 03/05/2008 04:20 PM Title: Expectations
This review is long over due considering I read this chapter over a month ago, but i'm selfish and I want an update so here it goes.
I'm glad someone finally gave Ron something (other than a Prefects badge) for him to feel good about that he actually deserved for good reason. You really should keep going with this story, I love it, especially the bit about the fire fruit. That was a crafty way to get Harry and Ginny together that I have not read before. I really want to see what happens with all of the couples so please update, I'm getting board.
Date: 01/13/2008 02:59 PM Title: Heartbeat
I'm the first reviewer in 2008, and like many WIP's I've read, i assume you've abandoned this story. Well, the work you put in and the results you achieved are worth it, even if you can't finish it. Telling this story from the many multiple points of view must have been exhausting, and so painstaking, but you made it a fun ride for us all.
I was most entertained, out of all of it, by mad, spiteful Ginny around chapter 40 or so when they were in Diagon Alley. All of her snippy comments were hysterical! I loved all the heart to heart talks between so many of the characters. Don't we all wish we had relationships & mentors like this story has? All best wishes from an admiring fan.
Date: 12/22/2007 12:03 AM Title: Heartbeat
Oh come on...please please please!!! I beg you to finish the story!!!! Please don't abandone it like this!!! You are such a brilliant writer! Please, it would make a wonderful Christmas present to all of your fans if you at least wrote another chapter....please emmilyne!!!! I hope you do...Once again PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! I hope you have a Happy Christmas and a very prosperous New Year!
Date: 11/24/2007 03:07 AM Title: Expectations
I love your story sooooo much and you really do have a brilliant mind!!!! I don't know where you get your ideas from but it is very different from the rest and i absolutely loved it! i've read so many other stories but yours is one of the best by far!!!! please please please fins to finish it! I think i'll go mad if you don't! I really want to see Ginny and Harry's relationship to prgress to another level....more than friends so please take that into consideration.Again i beg you please please please finish it! I've gotten so addicted to the story after reading, say.....48 chapters i just can't imagine the rest....please i need closure! i'm dying here.....thank you so much by the way for making 48 beautiful chapters....even if there were 48 more, i would still stick to it as long as you write it....thanx again and please do finish!!!!!
Date: 11/10/2007 12:16 PM Title: Heartbeat
You do have this knack for exposing to myself that I'm a glutton for punishment. I'm now hopeless addicted to this story, utterly dependent upon you to give me some closure.
Too many things I love to do it justice. Just here, in "Expectations," the wonderful nuances in every character, the magnificent talk between Adrianna & Ron (love RON everywhere in the story, just ready to scream at his--well, AND Hermione's--excruciating insecurity & stupidity); JKR owes you for such a beautiful expansion on his character. So many moments, lines, situations. The paperwork that arrives for Adrianna because she apparently killed a Death Eater--how sly. Flame Fruit--where can this be obtained?
But, I beg of you--don't leave us twisting in the wind. Can we--walk your dog? Cook your dinner? Just, please, don't abandon either of these wonderful stories. Yes. I'm selfish, and have no room to talk when I'm getting so little writing done. But we're way out from shore, here; bring us back in.
Date: 08/18/2007 12:22 AM Title: Under Duress
Ah! Incredible story, one of my favorites. DAMN YOU DEAN THOMAS!!!
That last line of the Dean/Ginny scene just about killed me. Well written. It's about 2: 30 in the morning...so I'll finish it after some sleep. Great job.
Date: 07/30/2007 11:42 AM Title: Expectations
Wow, just wow. Uh?! I have a serious doubt, when are you going to update this fantastic story? It have been 8 months since the last update, I hope it doesn't take any more time. You're such a great writter, you have my respects. Well take care, and please update soon.
Date: 07/25/2007 10:59 PM Title: Expectations
after reading all 48 chapters of this amazing story the first thing that came to my head was, "now it is starting to get interesting". Don't get me wrong, the story thus far was by far the best and most well written piece of fanfiction i have ever read, but after ending with Ron finally realizing how Hermione felt, and Harry and Ginny starting to get closer, and the actual school year starting i just can't wait to find out what happens next, I am not sure how long it has been since you have updated since i recently found this story, but PLEASE! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! :P seriously though, you are extremely talented, and i am definatly going to be constantly checking back here to see if there is a chapter 49 or above
Date: 06/12/2007 11:27 PM Title: Expectations
it kills me that this story hasn't been updated in over a year. it's glorious, amazing, and one of the most amazing things i've ever read. i love the characters, they're so believable and that's what makes this story so great. i know it's probably too late. but if only it wasn't. i do so much wish there was more.
Date: 03/30/2007 10:34 PM Title: Expectations
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!Its a crying shame there hasnt been a new chapter added. You are a brilliant writer, and I have been waiting patiently since August '06 for an update in this gripping story!! (The last time I saw a new chapter added at checkmated) Came to quidditchpitch hoping you continued the story here, but I see you haven't. Could you atleast post SOMETHING as to why you haven't or can't continue the story?? I'm dying here!!