Date: 10/22/2008 09:06 PM Title: Fix What You Can
"if only Voldemort’s Achilles’ heel were cheese, they’d be all set."
Well, maybe Voldie's lactose intolerant. Ron could give him some serious stomach cramps. And diarrhea! Maybe the war could be one while Voldie's stuck on the pot!! lol!
Date: 07/22/2008 09:33 AM Title: Expectations
I stumbled on this story by accident and just finished a marathon session reading it ( disturbed only by the necessity of going to work, dammit) only to discover that you're not done yet! Argh!
What can I say? This fic is AMAZING, and you and your betas go on my very short list of fantastic writers. And that's what I have to say. Brilliant.
Date: 07/18/2008 09:34 AM Title: The Tide of Change
I love this story! I completely love the way to give Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny's POV. You've captured me I can't stop reading. I've been meaning to review for a dozen chapters at least, but I keep clicking to the next chapter because I can't wait to find out what happens next.
You do a great job keeping the characters "in character" they react the way they should. They talk the way they should. (Okay, Molly's being a little hands off--but that's okay) Dialogue is great, it flows.
thanks for sharing such a great story.
Date: 03/05/2008 04:20 PM Title: Expectations
This review is long over due considering I read this chapter over a month ago, but i'm selfish and I want an update so here it goes.
I'm glad someone finally gave Ron something (other than a Prefects badge) for him to feel good about that he actually deserved for good reason. You really should keep going with this story, I love it, especially the bit about the fire fruit. That was a crafty way to get Harry and Ginny together that I have not read before. I really want to see what happens with all of the couples so please update, I'm getting board.
Date: 01/13/2008 02:59 PM Title: Heartbeat
I'm the first reviewer in 2008, and like many WIP's I've read, i assume you've abandoned this story. Well, the work you put in and the results you achieved are worth it, even if you can't finish it. Telling this story from the many multiple points of view must have been exhausting, and so painstaking, but you made it a fun ride for us all.
I was most entertained, out of all of it, by mad, spiteful Ginny around chapter 40 or so when they were in Diagon Alley. All of her snippy comments were hysterical! I loved all the heart to heart talks between so many of the characters. Don't we all wish we had relationships & mentors like this story has? All best wishes from an admiring fan.
Date: 12/22/2007 12:03 AM Title: Heartbeat
Oh come on...please please please!!! I beg you to finish the story!!!! Please don't abandone it like this!!! You are such a brilliant writer! Please, it would make a wonderful Christmas present to all of your fans if you at least wrote another chapter....please emmilyne!!!! I hope you do...Once again PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! I hope you have a Happy Christmas and a very prosperous New Year!
Date: 11/24/2007 03:07 AM Title: Expectations
I love your story sooooo much and you really do have a brilliant mind!!!! I don't know where you get your ideas from but it is very different from the rest and i absolutely loved it! i've read so many other stories but yours is one of the best by far!!!! please please please fins to finish it! I think i'll go mad if you don't! I really want to see Ginny and Harry's relationship to prgress to another level....more than friends so please take that into consideration.Again i beg you please please please finish it! I've gotten so addicted to the story after reading, say.....48 chapters i just can't imagine the rest....please i need closure! i'm dying here.....thank you so much by the way for making 48 beautiful chapters....even if there were 48 more, i would still stick to it as long as you write it....thanx again and please do finish!!!!!
Date: 11/10/2007 12:16 PM Title: Heartbeat
You do have this knack for exposing to myself that I'm a glutton for punishment. I'm now hopeless addicted to this story, utterly dependent upon you to give me some closure.
Too many things I love to do it justice. Just here, in "Expectations," the wonderful nuances in every character, the magnificent talk between Adrianna & Ron (love RON everywhere in the story, just ready to scream at his--well, AND Hermione's--excruciating insecurity & stupidity); JKR owes you for such a beautiful expansion on his character. So many moments, lines, situations. The paperwork that arrives for Adrianna because she apparently killed a Death Eater--how sly. Flame Fruit--where can this be obtained?
But, I beg of you--don't leave us twisting in the wind. Can we--walk your dog? Cook your dinner? Just, please, don't abandon either of these wonderful stories. Yes. I'm selfish, and have no room to talk when I'm getting so little writing done. But we're way out from shore, here; bring us back in.